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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Soul MateSoul Mate by Jaime Fradera This should be read to a background of vividly imagined celestial imagery; soft, ethereal music, the distant crash of breaking surf, a clear night, a full Moon, a brilliant canopy of stars ... Soul Mate Even as astronomers probe the heavens, Listening for the faintest spark from minds we feel must certainly be there, although we do not as yet have evidence or proof of it, day by day, the distance is shortening. Hour by hour, the circle is closing. Perhaps it is these thoughts and words that will jump across the shrinking span of Time, of Circumstance, and Space that still must lie between us. Perhaps it is this query, going out, that will be heard, acknowledged and returned. And then the circle will, at last, be closed! Then there will no longer be a doubt I am a part of the human race, that I did make a difference, after all, that whatever men or gods of fate might do, or have in store for me, I can feel stronger and less afraid, knowing You are there to take my hand, knowing I will not be alone anymore. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jaime! You came in! Thank you! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...and thanks for setting the stage for us. Gets my vote. ~hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very good...  regards, sudhir |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Your words set the mood in such a way that I could experience it too. *s When you think you have heard it all, listen more closely. ~Dorene [This message has been edited by Chanson (02-21-2003 11:36 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am a part of the human race, that I did make a difference, after all, that whatever men or gods of fate might do, or have in store for me, I can feel stronger and less afraid, knowing You are there to take my hand, knowing I will not be alone anymore. ====================== BEAUTIFUL...even your authors note was poetry. So glad you posted for the book Jaime!! "Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky ... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, yes, you are....and you belong! (kiss on cheek) Always look to the stars and believe in that star you wished upon as a child, sweet friend, for it beacons for you, this is wonderful, you have my shining vote, we all love you so much! (angel hugs from one Colorado poet to another) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jaime, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-21-2003 12:20 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
With a title like that, I was afraid this would be a weak wash of sentimentality -- but this is full of strength, wit and waiting ... everything that makes a poem worth reading. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Absolutely for the book! The best Soul Mate poem I've read. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A very good one for the book...  Ethel...garysgirl |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Absolutely made me warm Jaime...love it! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, written by one with an amazingly gentle soul and fantastic mind. I know this truth first hand. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
A soul mate is the best thing anyone could ever have. Very beautiful words, Jaime.  --Liz It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got... |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
poetry at it's best! I love the way you brought our humanity into the tapestry of what real love is all about! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's wonderful to have someone who understands us so deeply... I'm glad you aren't alone!! Great post!Oh, make me Thine forever |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You have a wonderful way of touching our senses, Jaime... Thank you... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautifully romantic |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Jaime, This is a new twist on soul mates but one I love a lot. This is a wonderful book submission. Dawn |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Yes, Yes, Yes, absolutely wonderfully worded here. A this has my vote. Soul mates are very special people indeed....and I have to add... you painted the scene for the reading so well.... I think it should be a part of the finished poem. Sherry Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (03-02-2003 02:45 AM).] |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
This is lovely and I cast my vote. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Beautifully imaginative. Joyce |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I settled myself into the mood-setting ambience of your words and then went on to thoroughly enjoy your poem! Enchanting! Warm springtime hugs, EA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . this speaks volumes. . . well done my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah hah there you are! Great Jaime - glad you got the voting box working, so my ballot is in  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful words for this wonderous kind of love. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Much enjoyed, Jamie. All writing comes |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Jaime, Awesome reading, so loved the imagery in this one. Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Soul Mate poetry definitely belongs in Passions Reflections book. LOL, I think I've already voted at least once for this, starlight Jaime. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
What a great way to voice your faith (it seemed that way to me). I suspect the signals are going out, when He is already deep within. Nicely written. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I've already voted.  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Like JM said.. even your authors note is poetry. Enjoyed very much. Maree |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jamie, I so loved the mood and atmosphere you created with this piece, lovely imagery! you got my vote! take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully expressed, Jaime! |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
nice write for the book Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
held my attention |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
got mine! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good and well written to the point |
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