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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Softly sleeping, gently breathing. Eyes closed and chest slowly rising. Looking at you, I see forever- in all simplicity and I understand. Every burn ever inflicted, all the pain ever encountered; menial tasks, monotonous moves- suddenly reasonable. It all comes together and makes perfect sense. My purpose, a meaning in life? Once so hazy now clearly crystal. All for you- and this moment. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is VERY GOOD..... Bridgette  |
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cupcake Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 116 |
This is deserving of my vote, I really liked it very much. I'm a reader - not a writer. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Looking at you, I see forever- in all simplicity and I understand. Every burn ever inflicted, all the pain ever encountered; menial tasks, monotonous moves- suddenly reasonable. It all comes together and makes perfect sense. =============================== well that just says it all....a moment in time that defines you. How lovely. a heartfelt write poetess....well done. "Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky ... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Jenn, this is sooooo beautiful, dearest friend, and may the future ahead of you always look crystal clear and may every facet of your heart gleam with loves smile and faithfulness! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, this has to be in the book, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Indeed, this most assuredly sounds like "True Love". ~ May love sing forever in your beautiful and gentle heart... Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Just don't let the scars build up. That's the best advice I can give. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Very nicely done... regards, sudhir |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Looking at you, I see forever- in all simplicity and I understand.' I love moment poetry..... |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
pretty |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very good book submission Ethel...garysgirl |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Lovely, very lovely.  |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Beautiful! Love is always best treasured in the precious moment! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Great choice for the book Jenn, you sure have my vote. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very lovely Jenn.. Much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you all very much. Jenn "Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me." |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
You've captured with your words this tender moment in time so very well. Such peacefulness and reassuring thought can certainly come from watching a loved one during their almost sacred time of rest. I love this poem. -Bob |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
A beautiful poem. Great submission Dawn |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It all comes together..in a very nice poem *s M |
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ZeraStarloft Junior Member
since 2003-01-07
Posts 11in a marigold |
i think everyone has felt like this sometime... you have my vote. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great writing Andrew |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice writing |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you all very much (again  )"Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me." [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (03-03-2003 11:51 AM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, Jenn... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jenn~ 'I see forever- in all simplicity and I understand.' Lovely thoughts .... just lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
there is nothing better than watching someone you love sleep peacefully :-) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Jenn...this is a beautiful reflection of love and gets my vote |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Beautiful as per usual, Jenn. Your writing always stirs some kind of emotion in me. Damn you. My vote goes to you. ~AF~ "Write something, even if it's just a suicide note." -- Gore Vidal |
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