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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
So, could it be that it is me? Haft become the fire in your eyes enough love to be your hero, melt a heart, stone cold at ten below zero? Do you often wonder? Did my songs in the key of A minor transcend into the wind that blows through your mind upon cold lonely nights, such as this? Decadence that belies upon my soul will challenge my dreams of tomorrow. For even when another looks into my eyes I shall look away, as if needing to shelter the last remaining shadow, of love hidden, buried deep within me, idle it sits upon the shelf of hope And though the pages become splattered with blood as though the words may somehow replenish the light of darkness' secret mourn we know, this is never to be...don't we? For although the pages written in red will someday with time fade away, As if the occurrence was simply a thought, or a figment of one's imagination, The innermost spirit of our shadows dancing together in a time different from now, Dear one, somehow we both know forever etched upon the very existence of the soul they will never, ever...pass © 2002 Dennis Hicks 12/25/02 2:13 AM |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Dennis, this is so sadly heartfelt, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you but know always you have those memories encased in amber deep down and always hold them dear to you as love can grow cold and fragile yet the memory is remembered and preserved! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this has my vote, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dennis, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
enjoyed this very much. Maree  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Absolutely wonderful poem!!!! Bridgette |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
"Dear one, somehow we both know forever etched upon the very existence of the soul they will never, ever...pass" Loved it Keep up the writing!“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Decadence that belies upon my soul will challenge my dreams of tomorrow. For even when another looks into my eyes I shall look away, as if needing to shelter the last remaining shadow, of love hidden, buried deep within me, idle it sits upon the shelf of hope And though the pages become splattered with blood as though the words may somehow replenish the light of darkness' secret mourn we know, this is never to be...don't we? For although the pages written in red will someday with time fade away, ===================================== some deep poetic ponderings here... quite an introspective piece. loved the analogies to poetry. well done poet sir!! "Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky ... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
oh, it touches me. Vote in! ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I am, such a fan of your poetry this slid right into my heart! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am so sorry I just found your poetry now as I have sure missed a lot, and my vote is in. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This deserves it for sure. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
there is quite some depth and introspection in this one... enjoyed the read... regards, sudhir |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is lovely, Dennis... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well said Dennis...I really like this one best *s M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee Dennis...I can't decide anymore...  ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Wow, thank you for sharing this. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Dennis! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dennis, Good one enjoyed. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dennis, another one I thought I had already read. Sorry, friend. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
To say what I like about this piece is to rewrite every word. An excellent read... especially those last few lines. I bow to you and yours with vote in hand. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dangnation, that was stirring! Kudos! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Thank you all you beautiful people for your kind words. You all brighten my day when you can relate to something that I've written about so close to home. Thanks you all again! |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Everytime I see your name I feel obligated to pop in and pay you a visit - you write beautifully. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... it gets my vote! *S* |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Wow, I like this very much too, it gets my vote.  |
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