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The Preacher and the Boy..... |
Balladeer
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Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The preacher watched the little boy as he walked through the church, Looked under all the rows of pews as though he were in search Of something he had dropped, perhaps, now lying on the floor... But then he checked the altar and he looked behind the door. The boy then checked the bathrooms and he searched the nursery And, as he watched, the preacher smiled with curiosity Till finally he approached the lad and said, "Excuse me, son. Did you lose something here or are you just out having fun?" "My momma said that God lives here", the boy said with a frown. "But I've been looking everywhere. He must not be around." The preacher smiled at that small child and said, "No, that's not true Our God is here, you precious lad. He's there inside of you." "Inside of me!?", the boy exclaimed. "Well, would you not get mad If I just take him home with me to meet my mom and dad?" "Not mad at all", the preacher said. "There really is no call. You see, my son, the fact is that our God is in us all." "No way!", the boy cried. "Don't tell me he's in that bully Spike Who punches me in school all day and stole my brother's bike! Or what about the counselors who scream at me in school Or grandma when she comes around and treats me mean and cruel?" "Them, too", the preacher said, "and you can take it for a fact That God's in everyone you see, no matter how they act. It may be hard believing when you see the things some do But, though the devil's present, know that God is in there, too." "Then I guess I should love all men", the little boy replied. "Ain't right to hate nobody, knowin' they've got God inside. I'll try to live my life the best I can to show I care For everyone, no matter what, 'cause I know God's in there." The boy then turned away and, in the middle of his walk, He called back to the preacher,"Hey! I'm glad we had this talk!" "I'm glad we had it, too." he whispered to the little child And, somewhere high above them both, the Lord looked down and smiled. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh a wonderful submission....it's 'Deer favorite of mine!!!! I still LOVE this!!!! I love the truth in this!!!! Bridgette |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, oh my gosh, now you seriously have me in tears, as I could picture myself in the shoes of that boy! (wipes tears) When I was 12, I almost gave up on life then I felt God had hugged me that very moment, and that's where I think my life has made a dramatic turning point, so I turned to God at that age and now I forgive those who abused me physically during elementary school, those who teased me of my short height and being too girlish, and I wish them well with all my heart! (smiles) This is precious, sweet friend, this is a message that has to be delivered, you have my most enthusiastic vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Balladeer, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A perfect example of what Reflections should offer... |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I agree with the message in this poem! Very well done, Michael! --Liz You can sit there and forgive someone until the cows come home, and it won't make a bit of difference until they forgive themselves. |
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angsana Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 77 |
A beautiful poetic story you've penned, Balladeer. Loved the thoughts here. angsana |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
NOw Deer... I want my poems next to yours..kinda helps offset my lack or spiritual writing and makes yours look like it is really good.. ( chuckling) Enjoyed this..and the lesson... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I remember this one...and I still am amazed. I've said it before and I say I'll again. Your gift of "balladeer" is so polished, you make it look so EASY...because it reads that way. But I know the thought that goes into keeping the meter true, the assonance of internal rhyme, and all of those "tools" that go by unnoticed because it's such a delicious read.... oh my I do go on, don't I? |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Smiling from ear to ear. Wish I could vote twice for this. Everything that Serenity said, though admittedly some of the practical poetry writing forms, etc. go over my head, so far, but I am learning.... I did notice how smooth it flows but the last line, "The Lord looked down and smiled"... I love it. Perfect ending. Fun to reread because it is so well written. Such talent! Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I remember this one too Michael. Karen made a good point, one I have to remind myself of sometimes. When I read something that flows this smoothly, it's easy to forget how much time and effort went into writing it and think...I can do that! |
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Balladeer
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Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
justbleu...thank you so much! I appreciate you very much.. Noah..yes, I believe you are a very forgiving and kind person. It shows in your words.... Sunshine...peace, light and reflections....thank you! skyshine...me too! Thank you, Liz... angsana...I thank you for enjoying my little offering... Ron...LOL! I can use all the help I can get to make mine look good. Unfortunately, being next to yours wouldn't do it!! serenity...yes, you DO go on...and please don't everstop!!! Kisses to you for such wonderful thoughts.... Pat...your enjoyment makes me have that same smile from ear to ear. Thank you so much for such kindness... Duncan....coming from one whose writings are as smooth as that proverbial baby's bottom, my thanks |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sigh. Is there such a thing as a perfect poem? Yes. I think we've found it. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I'm so glad I found this beautiful poem. I love it. Joyce |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
This is absolutely marvellous, I am in awe. I be me BUT who does me be? |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
YES...this is absolutely perfect in every way. This touches the heart, just as you do. Love and hugs to you, friend, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well you know I like this as I too believe there is good in everyone, absolutely everyone! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Michael, another excellent choice for the book, I absolutely love this and SO does my son You've got my vote! Maree |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful........beautiful gem as always a treat my Dear Balladeer Charisma |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michael, I honestly don't know what to say, except....... . and *click* and Hugs Ethel |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I love your sentiments in this piece, sweet poet. A wonderful poem that lights my heart. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The Lord is not the only One smiling... Wonnerful, wonnerful, wonnerful! Warm hugs for a warm heart! Linda |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah yes, I remember it well |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How you ever choose from your amazing cadence kissed archives is beyond me!! Im just grateful I dont have to ...I got the easy job...reading and voting. and sending spammy smooches LOL " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dearest Balladeer - this one gets my vote for sure. Wonderfully written piece. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Even in Toe? Ya.... especially in Toe. I always say God has a sense of humor. You get my vote here too. Peace! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
You have the devil in you, too, you scalawag. You've raised the bar with your words. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The Lord isn't the only one smiling. *S* I do love this one, Deer! *S* |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You could fill up the book all by yourself, with all your lovely poems. Ooops, forgot you already did (and I didn't really forget it, it's still my favorite to read before I go to sleep) Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Balladeer
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Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Thanks to all you wunnerful people!! It's such a pleasure writing for you.....Titia, glad you're still enjoying the book |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
There's definitely room for a poem like this -- most definitely! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Balladeer - all of them I've read are excellent for the book. My vote for this one... BC |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm smiling too, Deer... Ya know - I don't think I've ever read one of your poems without coming away with a smile... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A wonderful enrty and a memorable poem. Liz |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank goodness for that pop up reminder! I had forgotten to vote! Liz |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Heck Deer... all your submissions are superb! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Michael, God's not the only one smiling. But I'll vote for him since I don't see his vote here. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Micheal...Enjoyed this tender side of you. Did you ever think about giving classes on writing? I am amazed by your talent each time I read you...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
'Deer..this is perfect for Reflections!! ~Hugs & a vote~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Fantastic, Balladeer! I love it. I sure hope I can get one of the books with all these wonderful poems in it. I am saving for it, now. |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
I love these pieces that tell a story. How clever. |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Almost done reading through archives and dragging up your older works... But I had to stop again and say, you were truly inspired when you wrote this. Thank you for sharing it BWA |
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