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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Half way through midnight his guiding light flickered, blinked, cast it's glow elsewhere Half way through determination & my temptation it became clear, I was here alone. Sunkissed. "I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..." [This message has been edited by Sunkissed (02-19-2003 09:45 PM).] |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Solemn-ness and sadness rolled tightly into a touching poem. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
like this... and if I might suggest.. changing am to was in the ending.... a nice piece.. |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes...I like this  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I wish for the light to soon shine upon you and for a shooting star to criss-cross your horizons! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thanks everyone for your kind and thoughtful comments. Captain, thank you for the suggestion. Sunkissed. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just lovely, I really enjoyed it Sunkissed. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Beautiful short write,I like this alot. Jason |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Enjoyed! Charisma |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'm a sucker for poems about planets. Oh, and it should be "its" not "it's" Mike |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Half way through midnight his guiding light flickered, blinked, cast it's glow elsewhere ================================= such a surreal image... love the succinct impact of this star lit write.. and I love the title. well done SK!! "Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky ... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Wow, glad I decided to read this forum from the bottom up -- this one had gotten by me, and I would have missed it! Let's put this one in the book......... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Just beautiful...love the gentle feel of this. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
nicely done... regards, sudhir |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Neat poem that can be interpreted in many creative ways. "If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like the feel of this one |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I'm glad that this one came back up to the top....I would have missed it, too...  Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-24-2003 11:01 AM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Too short I thought and then I read. You said it all with what you said. Very good. Joyce |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunkissed - glad I stopped by, I like this... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh I love this!! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just....because! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I enjoyed... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunKissed~ So tenderly penned~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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