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Blued Brilliance |
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Blued Brilliance How do I redirect adoration and devotion? How do I cancel commitment and constance? Will I be able to breathe when oxygen is denied? Will I still feel the fire if the flame is extinguished? Where will inspiration come from if not intensity of emotion? I was never given the empowerment of this knowledge, this kind of confidence is beyond my capabilities. This emotional deliverance seems as improbable as my turning off the sunrise or silencing the wind. I lack the strength required to reverse the rain, to move a mountain aside, to turn away the tides. I possess no secrets of how to sequester the seasons. What would become of the sky if denied the clouds? What if the stars were stolen from the moon ... would midnight still retain it's magic? What if the tides were taken from the shore, if the waves were denied their constance? If the day was denied dawn, the night denied dusk ... would time stand still, would the seasons still change? Who holds these secrets, who is the keeper of the keys? For what feels like forever, I have believed it was you ... for so long now, you've been my axis, my gravitational pull. All this time you've been the one who turned the calendar pages, the one who promised the blue and the deliverance of the waves. Only your voice could ever compete with their calming constance. Not even the summer solstice captivated me as much as you in perpetual motion, leaving me as awestruck as I was by the ocean. No ... I don't begin to comprehend how to resist such brilliance, nor do I understand how to exist without such promised presence. I've no grasp beyond gratuity, no such securities of self preservation. Like shooting stars and the sustaining rain ... I only know how to fall. Yes ... I confess, I've fallen for the tides and all they told true ... as well as for the vulnerability of your horizon's endless view. This time I fell the farthest for the beauty of the ocean's blue ... most of all, I took the fall for the brilliant blues hidden in the hues of you. ~*~ " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Free verse AND rhyme... you sure know how to make the sun smile... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Smiling here... Your heart is showing, and it's beautiful. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh this is stunning... absolutely. voting! Maree |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Thank you for getting this poem up here, Janet Marie... You most definitely have my vote! ~El Campeador “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
about time... Moths..... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This reminded me so much of tha song by Jimmy Cliff "I Can See Clearly Now", it seems with your gorgeous words it couldn't get any bluer as you make the ocean reflections here sapphire blue! (kiss on cheek) I absolutely am putting my vote down for this, yay, wish I could be there to snorkel in the deep blue, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Janet, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Janet Marie...I'm so glad to see this here...you get my vote, and a |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
You certainly make blue beautiful. *s |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
WOW......loved it thoroughly Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well...it's about time! I was so hoping you would submit this one!! Has to be in the book...just has to be! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Janet, Your wings burn beautifully. Mike I know it's over. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Okay sent my wonderful review of this to you, but I will not take up the entire webserver with my raving review so I settled to pick this as my absolute favorite part... This time I fell the farthest for the beauty of the ocean's blue ... most of all, I took the fall for the brilliant blues hidden in the hues of you. BRAVO! This read like a prayer so filled with love, and the rhyme and freestyle together lady, you simply are the best there is - wish I could vote one million times for this one. You outdid yourself this time. You are changed. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
JM - simply stunning! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm sure glad the job of picking one of yours fell to you and not me! LOL On the other hand... I'd just bundle up the bunch and send them to a publisher. (That's a hint *G*) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Who holds these secrets, who is the keeper of the keys? For what feels like forever, I have believed it was you ... for so long now, you've been my axis, my gravitational pull. All this time you've been the one who turned the calendar pages, the one who promised the blue and the deliverance of the waves. Only your voice could ever compete with their calming constance. Not even the summer solstice captivated me as much as you in perpetual motion, leaving me as awestruck as I was by the ocean. you just amaze me when you get on a roll... about mothy time by the way... you slacker... |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Couldn't let this beauty pass by without my vote Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
VERY VERY NICE Picture you made....LOVELY!!!! Bridgette |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*Moth Magic* Janet, I'm so happy this is in for the book!! Your heart shines so brilliantly with this beautiful beautiful work of art |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
JM, JM, JM..ahhh, BUTTERFLY one..Okay, words fail me for they could never capture what you have here...very gentle smile to a master |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Lovely .... nice to see you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Blue and brilliant! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Janet; my dear friend...I miss you! and your incredible poetry...oh, this is so exquisitely done....Bravo!! Hugs, Ellie and in the book this does belong.. A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank you, m'twin. love you. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
like shooting stars I only know how to fall....spectacular! You will always have my vote, JM |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Browneyes, Its so nice to see your work. I loved this one alot. I felt you talking to the sky in the eyes of one who may hold your breath and it all lead perfectly up to those perfect last lines. So now all you have to do is see the ocean from a hidden cove.... like maybe on a sailboat.. Parker this goes to the book. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Janet Marie, Was so glad to see this posted here. It is brilliant, heart touching,..... actually, it is just plain perfect. I love rereading it, over and over. So enjoy, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jant Marie, I also think that it's about time you put one in here, and I love your choice for submission, too. I loved this one in Open and I love it here, so.... ......in there you go, I hope.... Hugs, Ethel |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
sweet butterfly....you are so priceless!!! as is every words that flows from your pen.....voted yes....for this yes....for you ALWAYS!!! Lauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I remember this one...It harkens to my Chesapeake. And so? Love it. Ed |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
So glad to vote for this beautiful poem. Joyce |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful! A perfect choice for submission, JM. Love ya gator-gal! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Janet, A brilliant choice from a brilliant poetess... Regards to you O Brilliant one, Sudhir |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Earth Angel is flying high with this one! Absolutely stunning on all levels! Kudos! God is working his magic through you, Dear One! Big, warm appreciative hugs! Linda |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah...I think you've included everything but the oatmeal |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
THANK YOU to everyone for your generosity and support. I know this one was just posted, but its very special to me for the promises kept that inspired it and I very much wanted it to be the one to reflect my poetry in the book. Thank you for helping to make that possible. my love and respect to poetry land. jm " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, This words have pierced this heart and Randies too. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I cast my vote for this beautiful piece. Joyce |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A leg clinging soliloquy which answered some of it's own questions. Needs read a few times to appreciate (most good poetry does) |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I'm not late...just don't like crowds! (Think if we chant this, over and over...summer will return?) |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
JM, Well now, I've never seen blue so intense! It doesn't get better than this. Gotta go vote. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Most exquisite expression here. So many heart pounding lines of expressed love's submission. So many pressing questions and images here that I am just left awe struck. The graphic at the end was even beautiful and just put the perfect finishing touch on your Prose/ Poem/ Masterpiece. I have never read so much into the word "blue" before. On and on and on I could go.... Wonderful!!!! -Bob |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
THANKS again to everyone for your support and your generosity of spirit. I appreciate you all. thank you jm |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
this take away my breath! ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thank you everyone for your lovely responses and support of my work, I appreciate it so much. thank again to all who stopped in to read and reply jm oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang ... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The blue hues of you surely belong within the pages of Reflections... |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
A treat to read this again, as I've read it so many times... Here's a great big VOTE for my favourite nocturnal arthropod. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Janet Marie - you do write them well... BC |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Janet Marie~ Well done lady...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thank you everyone for your replies and support..this one is special to me. Where the touch of lovers end and the soul of friends begin, |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
luv ya sweet poetess.....I understand a little better each time when I read you..... heart hugsss Lauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Janet Marie, I cast my vote eagerly for this lovely piece of artwork from your heart!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Wow wow, holy cow! I would have voted for this earlier, but I've been away for a few days. I can't stop coming back to it, and reading over and over and over *sigh* You've got it, missy (and my vote too, for sure!) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"I confess, I've fallen for the tides" lovely poem... M |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Beautiful poem. You definately have my vote Dawn |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
janet,a vote from me too enjoyed this much |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thank you thank you to this esteemed list of girlies thanks so much for your generosity and support. mothy love and hugs to poetry land jm How long have I been dreaming I could make it right ... |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
DID I VOTE FOR THIS YET?!!! WHO CARES !! simply exquisite |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
WOW! I love your writing and always get excited when I see something you have written. This did not disappoint. It is wonderful... Huggles, Marti Dwelling on the negative simply |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
*sigh* I can only vote once?? I suppose I can settle for coming back and reading it a bunch of times. |
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sperarifraai Member
since 2003-03-06
Posts 65Ireland |
Excellent poem Janet! Portrays very well the emotions that drives the pen to write it. Sperari |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
incredible...absolutely incredible... |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
It bothers me that when I'm most impressed, every intelligent thought is blown right out of my head... I loved it, and if I could, I would vote twice. Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you are very special to us....(and me) L~ Take me where the tides start |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You guys make me mothy heart smile.. thank you all for these endearing and wonderful responses Lauren.. you to me too girlie..me too |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A treasure of a read sweetJaneMarie... Hugs2uPoetFriend... *~coco*~ |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
"No ... I don't begin to comprehend how to resist such brilliance, nor do I understand how to exist without such promised presence. I've no grasp beyond gratuity, no such securities of self preservation. Like shooting stars and the sustaining rain ... I only know how to fall." An exquisite refection on the wonders sometimes missed. Wonderful words Janet. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A favorite of mine, as you know... grin--can I have a nickel for everytime I screamed POST THIS??? |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Revisited this treasure |
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