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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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I'll weave for you dreams of flesh Said the beggar to the queen A daring weave of intimate mesh Part reality and part dream And he wove - Winding the strands With deft and strong hands Marking the warp and the weft And he wove - With precision bold Weaving dark with bright gold Lifting the dream from its cleft I'll sing for you dreams of night Mingle the joy and the bliss If you can stand and do not take fright I'll mix in, some darkest abyss And he sang - A dreamer's song As the weave moved along The music was caught in the weave And he sang - A siren's pure tune While he courted the moon To cast dreams for the sorrowing eve I'll bleed for you dreams of power To keep vigil over day Where meek and might is joined this hour And the weave shows in truth the way And he bled - In tapestry of pain Wakening sun again As the moon and the stars stood still And he bled - The weave taking the hue Mingled old and the new Dreams of power to stay queenly will I'll weave for you dreams of flesh While the queen took the weave for her own By weaving the beggar into the mesh For the dream and the weave had both flown And he died - And so the queen grew In the wisdom she knew That had come from the weave of the cloth And he died - Till the power of gloom Spilling out from the loom Captured queen, song and dream in its wrath Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is a fantastic weave with an excellent emotive feel... Regards to you O Kethry Sudhir |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Lynne, a most excellent write. Perfect for the book. Maree  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I knew when I saw this the first time it had to be one for the book... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is truly a wonderfully woven dream..  |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Halfway through I felt mesmerised by it. Thanks. It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wow! You have woven a tapestry divine! I enjoyed every aspect of this fine poetic achievement of yours! Congratulations! Warm morning hugs, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes!! Excellent choice!! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'll bleed for you dreams of power To keep vigil over day Where meek and might is joined this hour And the weave shows in truth the way And he bled - In tapestry of pain Wakening sun again As the moon and the stars stood still And he bled - The weave taking the hue Mingled old and the new Dreams of power to stay queenly will ====================================== A pips book wouldnt be the same with out your gift of rhyme. This is a bittersweet beauty Keth. " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Kethry, this is lovely, sweet friend, this is a beautiful dream that is bound to come true, I love it, keep weaving away, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Beautiful! *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful Kethry as always Charisma |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
It's like being snared by a spider of words. Beautiful. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Kethry.....brilliant and I agree beautiful!!! Bridgette |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Absolutely beautiful! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This wove its way into my library long ago... now I look forward to it being in a non-cyber library as well. *S* Excellent!! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I already loved this one Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Absolutely, Keth  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh Yeth, Keth....truly a total package going on here. Yeth indeed. I vote.... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kethry, I love this poem of weaving...  . . And, I honestly thought that I voted for it when I was on the computer earlier. I'm glad I looked again, because I hadn't....so...*click*..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
a lovely weave of words and thoughts...click goes the button |
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angsana Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 77 |
Beautifully woven words!!! Thumbs up! angsana |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I'll sing for you dreams of night Mingle the joy and the bliss If you can stand and do not take fright I'll mix in, some darkest abyss And he sang - A dreamer's song As the weave moved along The music was caught in the weave And he sang - A siren's pure tune While he courted the moon To cast dreams for the sorrowing eve" Kethry, the feel and movement of this brings the pictures to me so clear...really enjoyed this |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Wonderful poetry. Joyce |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
...and a wonderful bedtime story by which I may say my good-nights tonight... He wove, He sang, He bled, He died... but he did one heck of a good job of weaving dreams. (Amen) Enjoyed the read. -Bob |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kethry - Nice to see you, and my vote for you my friend... BC |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Kethry, I am getting to expect only excellence such as this from you now Fantastic entry. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Love this Kethry ( as I do most of your work )Sure to be a top choice! There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful story... |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
nice ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Keth, You have my vote. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
So beautiful, Kethry. I love this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ This is absolutely B R I L L I A N T ~ Special *huglets* to you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I'll weave for you dreams of flesh While the queen took the weave for her own By weaving the beggar into the mesh For the dream and the weave had both flown And he died - And so the queen grew In the wisdom she knew That had come from the weave of the cloth And he died - Till the power of gloom Spilling out from the loom Captured queen, song and dream in its wrath always a wondeful weaver of words, Keth hugss M |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
excellent write |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, how did I miss this? Amazing writing. Sandra |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
The master at work, excellent! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Beloved one you know that this is splendiferous and yes it deserves to be in the book, simply because with quality poems like this the book will sell and sell really well. I’m always telling you beloved that your writing is exceptional and you always say its because I’m biased. Truthfully I can tell the difference between good writing and writing that is merely adequate……… your writing is always good, more often superb and this is no exception it shows your quality and your ability and I applaud you as always Another resounding YES this should be in the book. Love it and love you utterly  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds but I can face the future with courage brave and bold Footprints In My Heart Kethry [This message has been edited by Marsha (03-05-2003 11:23 PM).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Fantastic!!!!! Add me to the list of voters for this magnificent tale!!!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Simply wonderful!! Gets my vote. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Keth, this one is a book by itself. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Excellent! SG |
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Bohemianaus Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 69Australia (South Gippsland) |
Your writing always blows me away - i love movement in this, Lynne God bless and keep you, Namaste! |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Lynne,this is incredible.It is so unique, fantastical and irresistable.Loved every phrase and rhyme.This is going into my special library to enjoy.Can't wait to get the book!If I could vote,I would.But I can see there is no need for ,of course,this is quite understandably accepted. Peace,Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
I'm speechless ...... And I can't vote for it ....there is no box to check!  ~Sheri |
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