navwin » Archives » Reflections on the Web » World's Wet Kiss
Reflections on the Web
Post A Reply Post New Topic World's Wet Kiss Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Andrew Scott
Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

0 posted 2003-02-18 01:38 PM


Curls to the moon
Caress the sand
World’s wet kiss

© Copyright 2003 Andrew Scott - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

1 posted 2003-02-18 01:39 PM


Nice ocean thoughts.

I know it's over.
The Smiths

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-02-18 02:56 PM


This is beautiful. I love it

Cold hands means a warm heart

Local Parasite
Deputy Moderator 10 Tours
Member Elite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg
3 posted 2003-02-18 04:47 PM


This isn't bad... short and simple, and very open.  Earth Angel's interpretation is right, mine was wrong.  Will try harder next time!

Parasite


"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

[This message has been edited by Local Parasite (02-18-2003 04:56 PM).]

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-02-18 04:54 PM


Andrew, I envision high seas curling upward to the sky and then rolling to shore. Indeed, that would be a luscious wet kiss!

Warm hugs,
EA

Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
5 posted 2003-02-18 06:26 PM


Short and sweet..I like it.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 2003-02-18 06:33 PM


What a lovely hiaku reflecting the power of the tides
Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
7 posted 2003-02-18 07:24 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this haiku is so beautifully easing and refreshing, dearest friend, I'd love to see this gem among a series of haikus and senryus in the new book, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andrew, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Chanson
Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
8 posted 2003-02-18 09:45 PM


Bigger than life itself. *s
Andrew Scott
Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
9 posted 2003-02-19 01:30 PM


To one and all, thank you.  Your words are the coin of the realm.
Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
10 posted 2003-02-20 09:13 AM


Wonderfully short yet sweet!!!!  Enjoyed much!!!!!

Bridgette

Charisma
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906
lost in blue pages
11 posted 2003-02-21 04:50 AM


Lovely haiku......enjoyed it very much

Charisma

Jenn Cirrincione
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107
Fl
12 posted 2003-02-21 09:13 AM


Lovely, truly.

Jenn

"Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me."

Duncan
Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

13 posted 2003-02-21 10:08 AM


Ocean thoughts for a wintry day...love it!
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
14 posted 2003-02-21 07:50 PM


Scott...I may change the way I think of a wave because of you, to even more lovely!
Ratleader
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
15 posted 2003-02-24 12:59 PM


Oh! Nice! Gets me vote,it does!

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
16 posted 2003-02-24 01:00 AM


Andrew - short but with the best of kisses...

BC

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
17 posted 2003-02-24 01:03 AM



Simple, yet beautiful.
Enjoyed this, Andrew.

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
18 posted 2003-02-24 07:34 AM


Very nicely said, Sir Scott...
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
19 posted 2003-03-10 05:28 PM


Can you say bump???
Andrew Scott
Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
20 posted 2003-03-11 01:11 PM


Thank you one and all... and gratitude to m'Lady Hoot for the bump.  Your words and votes are the coin of the realm... and I'm am enriched by your generosity.
I not sure if this is a true haiku... it wasn't written as such, but if it is, what a wonderful coincidence.  Peace!

[This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (03-11-2003 01:16 PM).]

Mysteria
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada
21 posted 2003-04-02 07:33 PM


Now just how darn cute was this?

     
To be hugged by a friend is wealth beyond words.

Joyce Johnson
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
22 posted 2003-04-02 09:28 PM


Cute indeed.  No place to vote? Joyce
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Reflections on the Web » World's Wet Kiss

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary