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World's Wet Kiss |
Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Curls to the moon Caress the sand World’s wet kiss |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Nice ocean thoughts. I know it's over. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is beautiful. I love it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
This isn't bad... short and simple, and very open. Earth Angel's interpretation is right, mine was wrong. Will try harder next time! Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. ~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche [This message has been edited by Local Parasite (02-18-2003 04:56 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Andrew, I envision high seas curling upward to the sky and then rolling to shore. Indeed, that would be a luscious wet kiss! Warm hugs, EA |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Short and sweet..I like it. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a lovely hiaku reflecting the power of the tides |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, this haiku is so beautifully easing and refreshing, dearest friend, I'd love to see this gem among a series of haikus and senryus in the new book, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andrew, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Bigger than life itself. *s |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
To one and all, thank you. Your words are the coin of the realm. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Wonderfully short yet sweet!!!! Enjoyed much!!!!! Bridgette |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Lovely haiku......enjoyed it very much Charisma |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Lovely, truly. Jenn "Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Ocean thoughts for a wintry day...love it! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Scott...I may change the way I think of a wave because of you, to even more lovely! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh! Nice! Gets me vote,it does! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Andrew - short but with the best of kisses... BC |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Simple, yet beautiful. Enjoyed this, Andrew. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nicely said, Sir Scott... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Can you say bump??? |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Thank you one and all... and gratitude to m'Lady Hoot for the bump. Your words and votes are the coin of the realm... and I'm am enriched by your generosity. I not sure if this is a true haiku... it wasn't written as such, but if it is, what a wonderful coincidence. Peace! [This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (03-11-2003 01:16 PM).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now just how darn cute was this? |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Cute indeed. No place to vote? Joyce |
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