Open Poetry #24 |
Written From Our Hearts |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
As we write our heart to you please handle it with care It's always coming out sometimes with a tear You may not understand what we have to say If you will but listen we'll talk to you today Sometims we write of joy when it's over-flowing Coming from inside with our faces glowing Then there are the times we feel our hearts will break At those times, we pray you show compassion for our sake Sometimes, past experiences about we love to tell Our memories in our hearts, the ones we love so well Then there are those times we hear love's whisper in the night So we feel inspiration from the moon and stars to write Most of us have found of our Darling's to write, we love Telling you of the one God has sent to us from above Many loving experiences of which we attempt to tell When coming from our hearts you feel the love as well Some write with expertise others just made a start All poetry is enjoyed when written from the heart So as you come here to read on pages of blue If you'll read our hearts with care we'll do the same for you |
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© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved | |||
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, always read and reply with care and compassion. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
indeed, these are our whispers of the heart.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, Kacy, for reading and replying.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well said Ethel...and so very true. Please check your email for a note from me. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, Joseph, for reading and recognizing whispers of the heart. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Nancy Lee. I'll go check it now.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
You are so sensitive and caring Ethel...along with being a great poet...you are loved [This message has been edited by passing shadows (01-02-2003 12:28 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Dixie. You are, too. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Nancy Lee... I did it. I just made it a little bigger this time. Now I'm going to try the graphics on another forum...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
If you'll read our hearts with care we'll do the same for you Classic piece of poetry Ethel. Love that ending especially ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very well written, Ethel...pouring out the feelings of one's heart can make one very vulnerable...we need to tread lightly and with respect when we read and reply...I see you have the font working...looks great!!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you so much, Salty. I appreciate you and your replies... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks Scorpio, Yes, we do need to be nice and try to understand when we read and reply. Yeah, Nancy Lee told me how. I like it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
What a rythmically beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing it. "am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Winston. I appreciate your reading and your reply. "Love makes the world go around" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you very much, James.......... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Ethel, I know just how you feel, in fact I think I may comment like this too much! (sigh) I've been through so much and now am having tough times holding onto whatever love still is with me! (sad sigh) I feel every time I read an emotional poem now I will just cry, guess I have so much of the feminity in me, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
No Noah, what you have in you is a very sweet, caring heart.... Thank you, Noah........... |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
a letter from the soul.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
There's so much heartfelt compassion and loving from the heart going on around here! Thank you for this Ethel, it was great. Huggles, Marti P.S. How'd you do that great font? |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very good write, here, Garysgirl - gentle piece and peace. Cor |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very sweet Ethel..and so true. *s hugss M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good write |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
GOIDsparklESS, Thanks for youe sweet reply. I appreciate it.. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, sweet Marti... About the font........ Do you mean in the poem or in the reply? The one in the poem is just "italics". I will have to e-mail you this one that Scorpio and I were talking about. If I tell you here it will just make the font like this "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks for your reply, Corrine.... Peace to you, too... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, thank you very much... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Vandana.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Written from the heart is the best way of all, and you do it well. Enjoyed. Deb |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Excellent, Ethel. So beautifully expessed...I love this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Deb. I love to read your poetry. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, Vicky I'm glad that you liked it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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