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scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

0 posted 2003-01-02 08:21 AM

Thoughts of You

I lay beside you as the moon rises.
My thoughts are filled with such desire.
My heart will make no compromises.
My whole being is burning with love's fire.

I'll find you in the night.
My hands will search for you.
My embrace will hold you tight.
My lips will tastethe essence of you.

I'll take youto the sparkling stars.
My love willfly youhigh.
I'll lead you past the planet Mars.
And not stop until your last sigh.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-01-02 08:57 AM

Very loving and dream-like quality to this piece Scorpio.
Your talent for expressing romance shows in this write.
Very much enjoyed!
She is one lucky lady...
bet you make her heart sing and her eyes sparkle!
~Hugs & Smiles~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-01-02 09:10 AM

scorpio
Not me you wont. LOL enjoyed.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2003-01-02 09:21 AM

A very romantic piece....good images!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-01-02 10:57 AM

Scorpio, I love this romantic poem. May I send it to Gary?

BTW, how do you get the "Script font" to work? I love that. It's what I use on my Messenger and e-mails, too.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2003-01-02 11:32 AM

Wonderfully romantic. Just smiling, here. Enjoyed.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2003-01-02 11:36 AM

What a nice romantic flight you offer!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-01-02 12:40 PM

mmmmm, very sensual!

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

8 posted 2003-01-02 01:45 PM

Enchantress, thank you...expressing romantic thoughts is fairly new to me...I must tell you that your words here in Pip have inspired me...and yes I do believe her heart does sing...the sparkle in her eyes reflects that fact...

You're safe Sy!! Thank you for your read..

I'm glad you enjoyed the write, Eric..

Ethel, I'm honoured that you want to share this with Gary...by all means send it to him...if you are presently using the font in other applications..just grab and insert the html code..

Regards2you..I can see your smile from here...

Midnitesun...thank you for your kind comments..

Passing shadows..glad you enjoyed...

believe in what your heart feels...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-01-07 05:11 AM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Scorpio, I apologize I'm late replying to this, as you may know I have been facing such drama since New Years and have been feeling unwell and only now could I concentrate fairly! (sigh) I wish for this joy to always fill your heart, this is touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

10 posted 2003-01-07 06:14 AM

scorpio,
what wondrous, romantic flights of fancy you paint.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Salty
Senior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

11 posted 2003-01-07 02:40 PM

Wonderfully sweet words...kind of made me feel like sighing.

sounds like you must have a very lucky lady....if you share such things with her.
~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

12 posted 2003-01-07 04:59 PM

I lay beside you as the moon rises.
My thoughts are filled with such desire.
My heart will make no compromises.
My whole being is burning with love's fire.

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ahhhh... the moon the stars and romance set to rhyme divine...what more could a girl ask for.

Wonderful cadence kissed write of imagery and passionate intend.
very well done poet sir!!

Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past?
With this crutch, its old age and wisdom, it whispers no ... this will be the last.

jh

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

13 posted 2003-01-07 05:06 PM

scorpio~
This is such a lovely and romantic write.
I very much enjoyed the read.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

14 posted 2003-01-07 05:53 PM

Sweet love poem ....

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