Open Poetry #24 |
Our Story Ever Unfolding (repost and dedication to m'love) |
Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
This is for my Moonlight Romeo Just in case the whisper didn't reach your ears tonight in case you didn't get the kiss that was suppose to wrap around your evening. In case you didn't know. I love you. Happy Anniversary ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It was late New Years Eve and you topped my heart with a smile by tipping the hat of your friendship. We danced and lingered for hours just drifting in mischief and disbelief. We, the drink of choice for hungry eyes and lonely hearts broke through the haze of boredom and cornered ourselves a bit of hope. So smiling followed where we went as we spiced the night with friends as strangers. We didn't know fate had made our resolutions for us. Your voice filled my head and I was lost in the step of the twirl you made me dizzy with as you spun the threads of your heart around the comfort of my dreaming soul. Since then I have searched for worthy words and failed to find that single breath to say how much I thank you for taking my hand. It was late New Years Eve and you tipped your hat to the top of my dreams secluding me in your arms as midnight seized our kiss in its folding embrace. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet" [This message has been edited by Siofra (01-01-2003 02:10 AM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
A new year, with new promises. Thanks for writing this. I love these little peeks. Mike |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
What a beautiful love story, friend. Just simply beautiful. And you wrote of it so well. Thanks for sharing the happiness of your heart....... "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very happy write. makes me smile |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
I did hear your whisper my love, my own. Your kiss, however, is always on my mind; and I did miss your arms. Happy Anniversary my Darling, we will always be. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Methinks there's a romantic amongst us Happy New Year, Siofra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Siofra Lovely write. Enjoyed |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful love story. So well written....really a clever write and an enjoyable read....nice way with words! This is great stuff... "as you spun the threads of your heart around the comfort of my dreaming soul." I likes it because it sings! [This message has been edited by ethome (01-02-2003 09:23 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
How really really beautiful! Congratulations to both of you, you are poetry and true love entertwined. |
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