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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
My only wish was to love you Discover you Dive your soul uncover you breathe your goodness & when I was through? peruse your imperfections & make the connection I need to ONE with you glide waves of your psyche until you hold tight, me Why hide in fear that I~ One loving you so sweetly I swear, completely MIGHT cringe? I don't fear the dark nor creak of hinge My wish: Find your perfect center If you never understand me Any better KNOW you were my LOVE, My mentor, & If you change your mind ever I want you, I shall always, always want you... Sunkissed. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
and that would be a lucky person to have such things written about them... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
& when I was through? peruse your imperfections & make the connection I need to ONE with you glide waves of your psyche until you hold tight, me Damn I like this. I like the style and the use of capitals. Which surprises me, but it seems to add to the effect of the poem. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is absolutely beautiful. I love it, but it has a little sad feel to it. You write so well friend....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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