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Winter Here
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Winter Here |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA 
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Hearts that mend they still depend on memories like a scar the beats they send they never end though they may travel far they weave and wend across the miles to where you are taking comfort in a cold rain splatter drops of freezing tears that bring a delicious chill a biting wind to warm the pain silenced emotions of frozen years that taunt and haunt me still Hearts that mend they still depend on memories like a scar the beats they send they never end though they may travel far they weave and wend across the miles to where you are bundled up against icy air crawling goosebumps on my skin shivers work through these bones wondering if it's winter there did your season change within or do I face this storm alone? "People say I should learn some self control; but I just want to exorcise my soul" |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Interesting. Well written. Sounds like the beginning of the end. But, not always! Hope this isn't a real, current experience. If so, heart hugs to you....and may your new year be blessed. Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hearts that mend they still depend on memories like a scar *********************** Very nice line, Jeff. Happy days to you, mending takes time. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wonder, sometimes, the same thing.  |
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Jeffrey E. Osborne Member
since 2001-11-01
Posts 160out there |
I'm still wondering too... |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
I like the way you alternated this one, it gives it a very lyrical feel. Perhaps that was the intent. It is indeed very true, that in mending, we must still rely on the memories, and not forget them. Jan |
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