Open Poetry #24 |
Fragmented Memories |
Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Treasured memories of childhood days Warms this old heart in so many ways. I can hear the sounds of that magical time. Remembering faces that were left behind. Kaliedoscopic fragments of where I have been Encircled by so many long forgotten friends. I collect and cradle these precious dreams. Creating a vision like none I've seen. These sweet thoughts leave me in awe and wonder As they dissolve into a myriad of color. Memories so special still held deep within Have molded me into the person I am. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Loved those 'kaleidscope fragments' Well done friend. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
each memory molds us, yes. I agree. Good write! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you Midnight Sun and passing shadows for stopping by to read. I appreciate your comments. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey you! Nice to see you again...how've you been? Very long time no see my friend...was a good surprise to see your name on the boards.. interesting look into your thoughts... hugs.. K |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Eloise! Welcome back! So very good to see you again! Lovely poem too! Have a Happy and Blessed New Year! And don't be a stranger! |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
Lovely poem, Eloise. I really liked the feel of this, all those memoreis blending in like the colours in the kaliedescope. Jan |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Eloise! Welcome home! Happy New Year, and thank you for using one of my favorite words! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Severn, Denise, Jan and Sunshine, thank you all so much and Happy New Years to each of you. It's good to post again here. It has been awhile. So many wonderful new poets as well as the cherished old. |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
Sweet, simple, elegant are the words which come to mind after reading this bit of verse. Good job! And so true. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you so much LadySofia. I appreciate the read. |
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