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Rusty
Junior Member

since 2002-12-14

Posts 18

0 posted 2002-12-16 08:09 PM

here and there are places
that I use a lot
one, is a place I am
the other, I am not

there can be pretty far
or it can be close by
and there can even disappear
when I go bye-bye

if I go for a walk
to the place called there
how is it I end up
being here, not there

so I told my here to stay
when I left to go
but lonely here showed up there
and why I do not know

I just can't understand why
a here will go to there
but there always runs away
from here to over there

[This message has been edited by Rusty (12-16-2002 08:11 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-12-16 08:50 PM

I really like this one.

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-12-17 01:49 AM

this is kinda a neat little one! I like the wording.

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (12-17-2002 01:49 AM).]

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

3 posted 2002-12-17 03:35 AM

Lovely words..
Great thoughts too..

Keep writing...

Hugessssss

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

4 posted 2002-12-17 07:21 AM

okay, I'm confused!! hehe...reminds me of "who's on first?" enjoyed my friend!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

5 posted 2002-12-17 11:36 AM

Don't know if I'm coming or going. Dizzy but enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-12-17 02:05 PM

(sigh) Oh Rusty, this is wonderful, sweet friend, you always take us on such wonderful walks with your words, and I think there and here can always be juxtaposed and fit together! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rusty, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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