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Open Poetry #24

My weekend of no worries

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2002-12-29 09:00 AM

The break of dawn kindly greeted me
shaked my hand and told me to see
To look at the beginning of a beautiful time
My weekend of no worries, a few days to feel just fine.

A little time off from the world of stress
which made my life an awfull mess
My heart was mented, my body in pain
My eyes constantly producing rain

Welcome were these lovely days
lots of fun, laughs and amusing plays
Feeling able to kick away the stress and sorrow
while only thinking of today and tomorrow

Now, the curtains of my weekend of no worries are nearing the ground
The audience admires and tries to not produce a single sound
'Cause all realise my weekend of no worries did close
and all over again my worries and sorrows rose

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-12-29 09:35 AM

This picture you paint hangs on my own wall
as well...I just dust it off a little
every now and then....

Welcome to Passions....

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2002-12-29 09:41 AM

Like Magnus, I understand these feelings all too well. A small reprieve, and then it's back to the grindstone. Almost a tease sometimes. You've captured this well. Welcome to Passions Zenny.

Best wishes,
/Kit

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

3 posted 2002-12-29 11:18 AM

Both of you, thanks for ur warm welcome although i feel like part of the big family' allready for my short time i spend with u guys yet.

thanks for ur replies

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

4 posted 2002-12-29 11:18 AM

*sowwy*.. clicked 'submit' twice i guess :/

[This message has been edited by zenny (12-29-2002 11:20 AM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-12-29 12:20 PM

Hi Kelly....

I liked the way you captured all these feelings. It was very well done.

(I'm bumping it back to the top for more people to get a chance to read.....)

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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