Open Poetry #24 |
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The Chase |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio ![]() |
The allure of you, comes with the wind's mystery, though you've sank so deeply into my soul, this hunger ravishes the depths of my dreamless nights, resolutions come on glimpses of revelations, that upon your much desired capture, i would probaly let you go, free to ride the wind again, as i'd be soon enchanted, by the elusiveness of another [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-29-2002 12:11 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess It is the way of life, enjoyed. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The quest to capture and the completeness of release....each in contrast, yet so much a part of each other... Very nicely written...thanx.. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
inkedgoddes, I have a feeling this is one of your "observation" poems, or is it from "participation".... ![]() You are so talented with your poetry that I can't really tell. ![]() Either way, I still enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing..... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-29-2002 11:43 AM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
as i'd be soon enchanted, by the elusiveness of another It's the thrill of the chase not the prize that many of us seek |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful words. Enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - a chase will be, yet to not chase would be a mystery... BC |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
simply beautifully written ![]() |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Do you think you can ever be satisfied? Once captured, it is always there. You can release but not forget because memories never fade only dim. |
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