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Let's play in the tidepools
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Let's play in the tidepools |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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"Wanna play in the tidepools?" That was your opening line. I laughed, and then you cast yourself upon my heart with line two. "Do you like quiche and java in bed?" I nearly wept in hysterics at that one, the vision went straight to my head. Then line three had a sinker attached. "I play flute music under the stars at midnight." I thought I could make it to line four, but was reeled in by that one line. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
WEll I think I would enjoy a fisherman such as this.....sure enjoyed reading about one. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks for the reply Salty.  Yep, some lines are really catchy. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write...strange lines...never had anyone say such things to me...kinda neat |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, Lady. Here's another one of yours that I almost missed. This one was posted while I was out today, too. I sure am glad that I looked near the bottom of the page and saw this. I think your fisherman had some pretty good lines in this one.... HeeHee!! I enjoyed reading it, Kacy....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i dont think these lines would quite do it for me, but whatever floats your boat, right, nice sentiments, different kind of poem, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thnaks friends, for reading and replying. There were actually a few more lines he threw out, these are ones I remembered; I love to play in tidepools and I love quiche. And Native American flute music under the stars? Romantic. Did I mention the fine wine, scented oils bath, aromatherapy and massage? hungrily smiling here in memory |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
well I'll have to say..he's creative..hehe!! enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I may have to borrow these lines and give them to my son. Maybe he can catch a sweetie with them!! Hugs and Smiles, Marti A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh boy, I once knew a man with lines this good. Swept right out to sea, I was. Nice memories, great poem. Sandra |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Midnite--I think those lines would have hooked me too...now does he believe in catch and release? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You wrote a grin! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hook line and sinker...poetically speaking of course  great use of metaphor Kacy...so what did ya use for bait anyway  Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Grinning at your Q, JM. Why body poetry of course! as opposed to bawdy.  Ladies, we all enjoy a good creative line, don't we? |
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