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Open Poetry #24

They

dhicks03
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since 2002-12-26

Posts 267
Missouri,USA

0 posted 2002-12-28 02:59 AM

They Bleed You...

Play with your emotions
leave you with the notions
sometimes the question
"Do you love me now" ?

They Need You...

Until the burden
outweighs the certain
truth...sugar coats the bitter pill
and yet you still
ask "Do you love me now" ?

They Seath You...

Their words rob you of time
and chant to your mind
silently you hear their voices
comtemplating your choices
of whom you ask the question
"Do you love me now" ?

They Hurt You...

Their influences on you
shadow your world,
in colors of blue
they make you wonder
beg you to ponder
a different suggestion,
of question,

"Are you done...killing me now" ?

Copyright © 2001 Dennis Hicks
12/17/01

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2002-12-28 03:34 AM

ouch! a great write.. really got what you meant (I think!) what I got sure was strong. Ahh so many people lying with their love.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-12-28 03:37 AM

perspective of a man, yes. I appreciate your words.

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2002-12-28 04:09 AM

Not all of them, Dennis. Have you met Dixie (Passing Shadows)..smiling here, oh, this isn't Feb. yet, huh!

Liked this and all the others but it is late here and need to go back to sleep.

Wamr regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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