Open Poetry #24 |
As Heaven's Trine |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Another chapter turns another candle burns For what cannot be changed another path arranged From what cannot give up and what will never rest Another plunge to take and what recovered blessed The cycles of the body within the cycles of a life For what is best humanity and all that braves the knife From what cannot be taken down and what will never fly In single destination soars the spirit, mind and sky Physical dimensions watched so closely to stay strong The spirit covets forces great to bolster far and long To shine into the morning another sun conforming In merge to take a reverent shine among the ones in heaven's trine Copyright Kkh 12/27/02 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
From what cannot be taken down and what will never fly In single destination soars the spirit, mind and sky Your thoughts are spectacular in their own write~ and truly a wonder to behold. I wish you a very Happy New year TD~ |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Beautiful I'm dangerous when left alone hehehe |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
There ya go again...reaching for the F and W...AGAIN!!!!! Nicely done K. Soft, tender and humbling. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Spectacular! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, my friend, 'tis not only heavens trine that is wonderful and beautiful, but the poetic trine you've shared with us, too. jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (12-27-2002 08:12 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Kathleen..I do believe this is my favourite from you now. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Great rhythym, and wonderful words and meaning, I like this piece a lot, good job A good new year to you! keep writing. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD You already know I think you are a wonderful poet, (don't you?)...this is just another example of why. |
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