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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-12-21 12:03 PM

In His Kiss

tenderly he touched
my strawberry hair
he could have forever
left his hand there
but he gently
then touched my skin
a new lifetime
somehow began
making the past
just a dream away
in his kiss
I awoke today

“life is not about breathing moments, it is about moments that leave you breathless.” author unknown
It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass sno

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-12-21 12:59 PM

helen - a kiss indeed, soft, tender, with caring...

BC

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-12-21 03:10 PM

it's nice to be able to shed the past, with the help of a kiss

neveah5
Member

since 2002-11-22

Posts 197
Ohio

3 posted 2002-12-22 05:54 PM

i like this, i like the rhyme and i dont usually like that much.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-12-22 10:57 PM

(smiles) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! (sigh) May this loves beauty always smile in your heart, sweet friend, I love the romance of this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

5 posted 2002-12-24 01:08 AM

mmmmmm

I like this a lot!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2002-12-26 12:28 PM

The power of a kiss...James

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2002-12-27 01:53 AM

Helen~
I'm loving this one...such a tender write.
Beautifully penned.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

christian
Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 331

8 posted 2002-12-27 04:38 AM

you have a way with words that captivates.
and is so inviting that your readers feel
the way you feel. breathtaking.
:suffocating:

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2002-12-27 11:21 AM

Helen, a kiss and a touch can speak volumes, can't they??

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

10 posted 2002-12-27 08:21 PM

Wow! Powerful! Very clean and perfectly written. Loved it.

jwesley

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