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Open Poetry #24

Some Crazy Thoughts

quik
Member

since 2002-11-27

Posts 91
Dinwiddie,Virginia

0 posted 2002-12-16 04:26 PM

I been thinking a short time ago
Something has crossed my mind
Actually is was about 2 days ago
My girlfriend called me saying she wasn’t doing fine
And a thought pop up in my head
I knew exactly what she was going to say
It was something like” Baby I don’t want you dead”
And thinking that thought doesn’t come by everyday
It got me scared for a second
But didn’t intellect
I could have reckon
That maybe I made someone upset
But that didn’t bother me since
I knew what I had done
But I had a sense
That I would be on the run
She continued with her thoughts
Of grotesque, decisive words
But gathering the information I fought
Thinking everything she said was absurd
The phone was going dead
And she could only say the last few to me
She said” Always look up ahead”
That way you know your free

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-12-16 08:53 PM

I like the words written.

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-12-17 01:45 AM

nice ending

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

3 posted 2002-12-17 03:38 AM

Lovely words??

Salty
Senior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

4 posted 2002-12-18 03:23 PM

always look ahead huh? Does that work?
If it does then I'm doing it *S*

Liked your thoughts going down on this one.

~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

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