Open Poetry #24 |
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Queen's Gambit....CheckMate |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
The battle nigh as pawns arrange upon the field of black and white. Where pieces fall in stark derange from bishop bold to gallant knight A wish does come upon the lips of maiden fair before the joust. Please kind sir, with fingertips do softly move, do not arouse. His soft of heart, and gallant mind plied oh so well by tender word. As pieces fell, his moves now blind her cries of joy were well now heard. A pawn was moved to take the queen in sudden swift and silent thrust. Her move unseen, a pawn careened away from her in gamely lust. The match did last into the night between the dusk and darkened skies. As teases gained a grinning sight a wink and twink from gazing eyes. A man, a friend, a valiant foe into the hours till his defeat. And then to say adieu, I go.. A farewell smile, the game complete... [This message has been edited by Magnus (12-27-2002 03:51 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Can't win them all.. ![]() |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ahhhh, but by the gracious defeat....to the loser goes the spoils....the victor... Thanx.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well now, this was very interesting...what a great DREAM... As opponents, it takes a special kind of fortitude and grit to raise the game to win / win. Hope all your games are win / win Mag. ![]() ThisDiamond |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, I enjoyed this look at the game. Careening pawns...I've seen this scene before. ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Barry, friend, I somehow think this poem is about much, much more than a chess game!?! HeeHee..... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A wish does come upon the lips of maiden fair before the joust. Please kind sir, with fingertips do softly move, do not arouse. A wonderful write Magnus. enjoyed Maree ![]() |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
An excellent read! Enjoyed the game played. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry...May I just say, I love this?! ![]() Just did!! ~Hugs YOU!~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry You play well...with just the right moves. Really enjoyed this! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A pawn was moved to take the queen in sudden swift and silent thrust. Her move unseen, a pawn careened away from her in gamely lust. The match did last into the night between the dusk and darkened skies. As teases gained a grinning sight a wink and twink from gazing eyes. A man, a friend, a valiant foe into the hours till his defeat. And then to say adieu, I go.. A farewell smile, the game complete... ~*~ Touche! |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
much more than a chess game between these lines--excellent!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Me thinks that there is much to this game. Excellent match of poetic verbage I love the depth... Cher :squeeze; Poetry is: |
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