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A HOLIDAY SONG
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A HOLIDAY SONG |
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Music Maker Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 152THE ORIGINAL !!!! 
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"WALKIN' IN A DOGGIE WONDERLAND" Dogs tags ring, are you listening'? In the lane, snow is glistening'. It's yellow, not white - I've been there tonight, Marking up my winter wonderland. Smell that tree? That's my fragrance. It's a sign for wand'ring vagrants; "Avoid where I pee, it's MY property! Marked up as my winter wonderland." In the meadow Mom and Dad will build a snowman, following the classical design. Then I'll lift my leg and let it go Man, So all the world will know that it is mine! Straight from me to the fencepost, flows my natural incense boast; "Stay off of my turf, this small piece of earth, I mark it as my winter wonderland." MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! Someone who thinks logically provides a nice contrast to the real world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wonderful! I really enjoyed this. [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (12-16-2002 03:49 PM).] |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
well I suppose Christmas caroling at your house is out this year.  Pretty clever little write hear. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Music Maker Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 152THE ORIGINAL !!!! |
Thank you both for your replies. Salty - No one gets near our house when Bessie (Our German Shepherd) is loose, and as I am a little short of cash this Christmas, you are right!!! Carol Singers will not make it up the drive !!! Someone who thinks logically provides a nice contrast to the real world. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful holiday song. Merry Christmas to you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Music Maker - Merry Christmas to you, and a most Happy New Year... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write...much enjoyed! ~Hugs~  ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
LOL! This is great! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Thanks for the smile. Merry Christmas and congratulations. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
ROTFLMAO...THIS IS SUPERB!!! Don't step in what that Bloodhound Balladeer left behind.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh John, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all wish you the happiest holidays with your whole family, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFLMAO!!! My boss has done her dead-level best to send my mood plummeting today... but she doesn't stand a chance when I can read epics like this! LOL Great work! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, just snuggle under that tree, no need for wrappings. That's where the best wonderland is anyway, isn't it? Congratulations to both of you. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Darling, you have outdone yourself this time!!!!!! I think this is outrageously funny and also well penned....and Bessie, our beautiful dog, thinks you wrote it just for her!!! So Bravo, and let's have more, ok?  Pen how you truly feel... |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
LOLOL, enjoyed..Happy Holidays! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Haaaaaaaa and I thought it was going to be a serious song...btw...great picture, has that Sunnyone touch  M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Great photo! You're not only handsome, you are a "Maker" of great "Music" as well! This song made me laugh! I have sung it twice already! da da da da da..... warm hugs to you and your new bride, sunnyone! Earth Angel [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (12-18-2002 07:07 PM).] |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
youre a sick, sick man. ha, love it. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
ROFL!! A wonderful piece of doggerel!!  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
ROFL! Oh, I enjoyed this MusicMaker! Perfection in cadence and rhyme throughout ... with an absolutely delightful flow! Really well done (and my old shepherd would have loved this "ode to doggy turf"). Just great, thanks for the grins.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Music Maker Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 152THE ORIGINAL !!!! |
Thank you one and all for the lovely replies - Yes, it was a 'doggerel' type rhyme LOL - It just pleases me that it has brought a smile to a few faces, and makes all the head scratching for matching verse all worth while. Happy Crimbo Everyone !!!!!!! |
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