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Open Poetry #24

The Truth About Love

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2002-12-27 02:44 AM

wonder of wonders,
the men at Love's door
when a ripe man worships a woman,
The Stars wake
and rivets of harmonious song filter through the universe
Love is a release of majesty;
the loved ones are a measure in kindness
were it not for Love,
man would have dissipated long ago
worship this yardstick;
sever your pangs of ill will
the one who clearly loves,
has on his side an angel-
the one who resents, is not forgiven
war is the trademark of a man torn with envy;
Love is the fortress of the blessed
wash your hands in a pool of Love-
the waters, there, will cleanse you
like no earthly waters can
Love is a gateway to God

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..circa 1986..Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris
..poem archived in several other sites
..channeled; from spirit, Ram; through Spiros

christian
Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 331

1 posted 2002-12-27 04:22 AM

great images. the last line just tinged
it all up with majesty as well--like
a conclusion. you managed to pull it off,
take a cliche topic and make it unique.
cool.

[*** and 1/2.][*****]

christian
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since 2002-12-18

Posts 331

2 posted 2002-12-27 04:23 AM

..circa 1986..Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris
..poem archived in several other sites
..channeled; from spirit, Ram; through
Spiros

and damn, you are tenacious.

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

3 posted 2002-12-27 05:49 AM

..christian../\..thanks for reading my poem; i appreciate your two comments..

../\..Spiros

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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-01-31 02:11 PM

Wonder of wonders...

indeed...

yes.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-01-31 02:14 PM

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

6 posted 2003-01-31 03:20 PM

..Sunshine../\.. + passing shadows../\..

..thanks, much, for reading my poem; i
truly appreciate your kind comments..

../\..Spiros

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