North, South, and a Full Moon

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Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

0 posted 2003-01-29 08:13 AM

I could have reached
and touched
that perfect gold coin
suspended
in the black sky night--
it slid down frozen limbs
in a slow drip
of endless reflections--and,
when I looked there,
all I could see
was you..all I see
is you

it was fitting, somehow,
that North and South should meet
beneath a moon,
full and gold--
dancing on the stairsteps
of where you began,
where we began--
and now,
our fingers
can stir those reflections
oh so selfishly,
they belong to us

shall I tell you all?

shall I melt into you
like the gold of a fragile moon
falling from the sky?

ah, my North,
do you know how much I love you?
do you know
I could die in your arms
and live forever?
I could,
I will--

so hold me close,
and I will hold you,
while we count seasons
and
gather sun
from all our
tomorrow moons

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

[This message has been edited by Sandpiper (01-29-2003 08:46 AM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-01-29 08:17 AM

now this adds to the meaning of moonstuck...

very nicely done...and I hope your tomorrow moons are always shared with the one you love.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2003-01-29 09:01 AM

This is a full moon worth waiting for... I enjoyed thoroughly...

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-01-29 09:32 AM

Shall I melt into you?

Well not me, but darn if the guy reading this isn't say, "yep, yep!"

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-01-29 09:42 AM

Sandpiper
Allot of commitment here, enjoyed.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2003-01-29 10:00 AM

I could have reached
and touched
that perfect gold coin
suspended
in the black sky night--
it slid down frozen limbs
in a slow drip
of endless reflections--and,
when I looked there,
all I could see
was you..all I see
is you

it was fitting, somehow,
that North and South should meet
beneath a moon,
full and gold--
dancing on the stairsteps
of where you began,
where we began--
and now,
our fingers
can stir those reflections
oh so selfishly,
they belong to us
============================

oh my this is lovely...what a wonderful surreal write of devotion.
love the imagery and whole essence of this high inspire,
very well done!!!!
Love your signature too

Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky.
We fell them down and turn them into paper that
we may record our emptiness.

K.G.

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (01-29-2003 10:01 AM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-01-29 11:13 AM

I really enjoyed this. I love all romantic poems, and this one is very goo....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2003-01-29 12:55 PM

So well written, creative, and very beautiful.

Enjoyed a great deal. Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

8 posted 2003-01-29 06:34 PM

JM already quoted my favorite parts (she does that a lot...lol). Loved the poem!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2003-01-29 06:45 PM

sounds like perfect harmony ......very pretty

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-01-30 02:39 AM

I can see this so clearly! just a beautiful write!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2003-01-31 03:32 PM

(sigh) This is soooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, imagine becoming one with the Lady Luna of your dreamscape's skies! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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