Open Poetry #24 |
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A Child is Born... (#1) |
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Nan
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Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA ![]() |
![]() Autumn Ellen Lewis - (Born 12/26/02) Tonight a child was born, Life's first breath vivified. From womb her essence shorn, With mortals to abide. Those eyes of innocence ~ A cherubim at rest, Observe with hesitance The world her entry blessed. Her untouched canvas waits To host a masterpiece Of hues time's brush creates From life-long verities. Are infants' palettes clear? An age none can recall. What does she see and hear? It seems she now knows all. My artistry's her gain. I'll sketch as I know best, Add colors from life's main, Yet she must paint the rest. With years of strokes in blend, Her portrait gathers form ~ Base tinctures of my tend With shadows of life's storm. To paint her future bright Would be my fondest dream To lend her shadows light Engraving Sunshine's scene. [This message has been edited by Nan (12-26-2002 10:21 PM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
All I can do is smile to this one... it really is touching and beautiful. such innocence .. a baby ![]() wonderful write! keep it up. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is such a sweet poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
AAAAWWWWW Nan.... ![]() This is SOOOOOOO sweet. I love the way you wrote this about the little baby. It's so cute and precious. Who's is it? Thanks for sharing this touching poem, friend..... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thank you, GG - Loner - and Ethel... She's mine (once removed...).. ![]() |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Well now, Nan, It doesn't get any better than this. You super lucky lady! Bless you all. ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nice thoughts here..happy holidays! Martin |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sigh...I love babies!!! Congratulations again on your beautiful granddaughter! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Nan~ I just LOVE her, and I LOVE this poem too. Written from the heart of a loving grandma, and penned in the ink of 'you'. She's a lucky little girl, to get to be your 'Munchkin'. ![]() Hugs, ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
i feel sorry for her. she's born the day after christmas so she's gonna get jipped and get 1 presents for 2 occasion [christmas and her birthday], shucks. oh, i know, i was born on christmas. whew. came to find out a lot of people like to save money ![]() good stuff. it's evidentally as honest as you'll come to a poem. and she's just a cute kid. don't squeeze her cheeks too hard. -chris. [This message has been edited by christian (12-27-2002 04:13 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Anticipation Underlies Time, Utilizing Moments of Nan-sense Expectancy Lengthens Life, Entreating Nuances Love Envelops Wonder, In Small |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfectly beautiful Nan. Congratulations again on the new granddaughter. She is so very precious. ~Hugs~ |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Larry - Martin - Sharon - Vicky - christian - Karilea - Nancy Lee Thank you all for stopping by - I actually wrote this the last time I got a little bundled munchkin - Autumn deserves her own of course - Karilea and Vicky have helped me out there (thankee) - I'll write her own special version as soon as she gives me a free moment or two... ![]() |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nan...she is so beautiful! Congratulations! ![]() |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
![]() Grammy Nan, this is such exciting news and she is just a precious doll with a fascinating name. Please give her mom and dad a big hug from all of us here at Passions. Kisses from Auntie Marti |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh wow, she is just toooo cute and that poem is just toooooo sweet ![]() ![]() I'm dangerous when left alone hehehe |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another Beautiful Blessing to add to the bunch! She is beautiful, indeed! Congratulations, Nan, and give my best to all! Try to get some sleep too! |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Congrats Nan, Life's treasures bestowed upon you and yours from the Lord!! Beautiful!! |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Nan ... from the picture to the poem ... an absolute delight. I think I can see you glowing from all the way over here. ![]() She's a beautiful bundle of joy. I hope everyone is doing well. Give my best to all, and big hugs to you sweet Grandma. ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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