Open Poetry #24 |
A Child is Born... (#1) |
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Autumn Ellen Lewis - (Born 12/26/02) Tonight a child was born, Life's first breath vivified. From womb her essence shorn, With mortals to abide. Those eyes of innocence ~ A cherubim at rest, Observe with hesitance The world her entry blessed. Her untouched canvas waits To host a masterpiece Of hues time's brush creates From life-long verities. Are infants' palettes clear? An age none can recall. What does she see and hear? It seems she now knows all. My artistry's her gain. I'll sketch as I know best, Add colors from life's main, Yet she must paint the rest. With years of strokes in blend, Her portrait gathers form ~ Base tinctures of my tend With shadows of life's storm. To paint her future bright Would be my fondest dream To lend her shadows light Engraving Sunshine's scene. [This message has been edited by Nan (12-26-2002 10:21 PM).] |
||
© Copyright 2002 Nancy Ness - All Rights Reserved | |||
GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
All I can do is smile to this one... it really is touching and beautiful. such innocence .. a baby wonderful write! keep it up. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
||
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is such a sweet poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
||
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
AAAAWWWWW Nan.... This is SOOOOOOO sweet. I love the way you wrote this about the little baby. It's so cute and precious. Who's is it? Thanks for sharing this touching poem, friend..... "Love makes the world go around" |
||
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thank you, GG - Loner - and Ethel... She's mine (once removed...).. |
||
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Well now, Nan, It doesn't get any better than this. You super lucky lady! Bless you all. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
||
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nice thoughts here..happy holidays! Martin |
||
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sigh...I love babies!!! Congratulations again on your beautiful granddaughter! |
||
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Nan~ I just LOVE her, and I LOVE this poem too. Written from the heart of a loving grandma, and penned in the ink of 'you'. She's a lucky little girl, to get to be your 'Munchkin'. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
||
christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
i feel sorry for her. she's born the day after christmas so she's gonna get jipped and get 1 presents for 2 occasion [christmas and her birthday], shucks. oh, i know, i was born on christmas. whew. came to find out a lot of people like to save money . good stuff. it's evidentally as honest as you'll come to a poem. and she's just a cute kid. don't squeeze her cheeks too hard. -chris. [This message has been edited by christian (12-27-2002 04:13 AM).] |
||
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Anticipation Underlies Time, Utilizing Moments of Nan-sense Expectancy Lengthens Life, Entreating Nuances Love Envelops Wonder, In Small |
||
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfectly beautiful Nan. Congratulations again on the new granddaughter. She is so very precious. ~Hugs~ |
||
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Larry - Martin - Sharon - Vicky - christian - Karilea - Nancy Lee Thank you all for stopping by - I actually wrote this the last time I got a little bundled munchkin - Autumn deserves her own of course - Karilea and Vicky have helped me out there (thankee) - I'll write her own special version as soon as she gives me a free moment or two... |
||
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nan...she is so beautiful! Congratulations! |
||
NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Grammy Nan, this is such exciting news and she is just a precious doll with a fascinating name. Please give her mom and dad a big hug from all of us here at Passions. Kisses from Auntie Marti |
||
Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh wow, she is just toooo cute and that poem is just toooooo sweet Mum says I can't have one though I'm dangerous when left alone hehehe |
||
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another Beautiful Blessing to add to the bunch! She is beautiful, indeed! Congratulations, Nan, and give my best to all! Try to get some sleep too! |
||
dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Congrats Nan, Life's treasures bestowed upon you and yours from the Lord!! Beautiful!! |
||
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Nan ... from the picture to the poem ... an absolute delight. I think I can see you glowing from all the way over here. She's a beautiful bundle of joy. I hope everyone is doing well. Give my best to all, and big hugs to you sweet Grandma. Best wishes, /Kit |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |