simply - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2002-12-26 06:56 PM

i tried to follow the wind today,
but lost it passing by,
the come and go clouds, on pathless paths,
watched thru this searching eye,

the gulls enroute to nowhereland,
fade out beside their flight,
erased along the peekaboo sky,
apparitions now of white,

and as i wonder endlessly,
entangled in how and why,
the ocean slips away from me,
flowing simply in sync with the sky

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-12-26 07:28 PM

Reminded me...
"As above, so below". Nice Write. ThisDiamond

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2002-12-26 09:03 PM

Utterly beautiful M..

Raf

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-12-26 09:19 PM

I think we all have a day where it seems
we are going 30 and everything else is
doing at least 65...or more!!!!

Nicely written....expressed well..

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-12-27 01:44 AM

beautiful scheme and theme

christian
Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 331

5 posted 2002-12-27 04:43 AM

simply gratifying.

yum.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2002-12-27 07:54 AM

simply smiling.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-12-27 08:11 AM

inkedgoddess
It's time to wake up, enjoyed.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-12-27 10:45 AM

I enjoyed reading this, too. It felt dreamy, like.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-12-28 01:07 AM

Like this...silky...James

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

10 posted 2002-12-28 09:14 PM

A nice read...reminds me when I live 2 blocks from the ocean....I can smell the sea air and hear sounds of the seagulls. The ice cream calling out and the knish guy walking on the beach....memories....

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

11 posted 2002-12-30 07:59 PM

Findin' yr feet
and walkin' away.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

12 posted 2002-12-30 08:07 PM

"simply" beautiful....wistful and wonderful.
from one who waited 44 years to see the ocean..this took me back there for a moment...thanks for that...think I'll keep this one.

Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past?
With this crutch, its old age and wisdom, it whispers no ... this will be the last.

jh

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.