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Open Poetry #24
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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2002-12-26 01:42 PM


Underwater Ballet

held under
I did
the water
dance
as panic
set in
thought I
might drown
arms and legs
then moved
in elegant
grace till
in release
I swam
away

“life is not about breathing moments, it is about moments that leave you breathless.” author unknown
© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2002-12-26 04:07 PM

I can picture a beautiful mermaid swimming in this one.........I wish I could paint the way that you write!!!!  You got a real fan here, kid!!!  ~~S~~

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2002-12-27 01:55 AM

*smiling big*
christian
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since 2002-12-18
Posts 331
3 posted 2002-12-27 04:36 AM


you are one slick woman.
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