Open Poetry #24 |
Christmas Poem (my 100th post!) |
Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
She sat alone and wished for a tree, for friends and family and blessed company, for a fireplace with its friendly glow, and presents or a kiss under the mistletoe. She wanted Christmas spirit for her blank journal pages, and lights to annihilate all the Dark Ages. She wanted to dance, to laugh and to smile, and a year of special memories which she could compile. But it was her tears which made the ink run and she broke down as she thought of everyone who was out partying or snuggling with those they loved and gazing up at the stars and thanking God above For all the things missing in her life and her painful reality cut like a knife. But as she flipped back through her journal, her focus shifted from ex to internal. She remembered those who had left their mark who, to her darkest hours had brought a spark and she began to wonder how many people there were who had been touched by her smile, or just by her... And deep down inside, she felt a small tingle, which was not due to lights, or Mr. Kringle she realised her life had influenced many and this made her so much happier than any Christmas tree or fireplace could and she told herself she never would, let anyone else feel what she went through and that's why she's sending this poem to you. ***** I wrote this while feeling rather down and alone on Christmas Eve last year. I've found the happiest times of the year can compound even the tiniest feeling of unhappiness a hundred fold. So I hope you all spend some time thinking about the impact your life has had on the world, and know there's someone out there thanking God you met them. Merry Christmas everyone, and thanks for making mine extra special. The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is extraordinarily ~special~, the insight so important to help balance some of us, who are alone, or, even lonesome, which is possible even in a crowd. The change in prospective is everything, can change a mood very quickly. I've been liking your poetry a great deal and watching for it. Enjoyed this. Hugs and warmest regards, Thank you Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
"It's A Wonderful Life" You hit it the mark square on, and I appreciate your sentiment and good wishes. Thank you for sharing. Peace to you and yours. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nicely done... Congratulations on your 100th post! ~Hugs and a Merry Christmas, Nancy~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (12-23-2002 08:43 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is so lovely. Your words touched me deeply. Blessings of the season to you and congrats as well!! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know what you mean here. Great emotional write! |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Thanks for your comments everyone, Merry Christmas! The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hi Rainbowdust, I haven't had the pleasure of meeting you yet. Welcome to the blue pages and thank you so much for this beautiful Christmas poem Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A beautiful Christmas poem... Congrats on 100. Maree [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (12-26-2002 04:01 AM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a wonderful hundredth post - It's great to have you here - Folks around the world touching the hearts of others is what we're all about... Merry Christmas to you and yours... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts...Merry Christmas...James |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Rainbowdust~ This is a beautiful write, with an important message. A wonderful post for your 100th. I'm glad you're a part of our 'family of friends'. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thank you very much rainbow a beautiful gift of self. Not easy to turn dark into light. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
cool beans. |
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