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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2002-12-16 01:53 PM

You rock my world
with your every touch
and each unspoken word
says so very much.
With gentle caress
and sweetness of kiss
you send me into
a heavenly bliss,
so hold me closely
and don't let go
let the rhythm
and feeling flow.
Look into my eyes
and don't say a word
come on sweet baby~
rock my world!

I know that you can 'read' me
but can you 'hear' "me"?

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (12-16-2002 01:59 PM).]

sigheyes
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

1 posted 2002-12-16 01:56 PM

I LOVE this! Excellent!

[This message has been edited by sigheyes (12-16-2002 01:58 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-12-16 01:58 PM

(smiles) Oh Donna, I love to call my Joanna "My Shakira" because we both love her music so much and is both our favorite artist! She can write, play, swing her hips and belly-dance and sing all at once! Joanna too loves to call me "her Rob Thomas" LOL! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooo cute, sweet friend, I love it, ROCK ON, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-12-16 01:59 PM

Ohmygosh Donna!
Someone

recently said this to me..
and I have to admit I had never heard it before...
Now after reading this..I take it as a compliment!
Thanks and I love it!!
~Hugs sweetie~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

Salty
Senior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

4 posted 2002-12-16 02:00 PM

Love this...love the rocking of the world..that's a very good thing.

Good on U
~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2002-12-16 02:00 PM

Thanks all. LOL at Nancy......hon........
take it as a compliment!! Take it all you can get it lady!!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2002-12-16 02:13 PM

Delightful!--This rocks!

~ hugs!

Linda

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

7 posted 2002-12-16 02:55 PM

Rock on, Donna...very stirring write...and when someone says you rock their world it's most certainly meant as a compliment!!!

believe in what your heart feels...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2002-12-16 03:02 PM

I had a man just yesterday say that he wanted to rock my world...maybe I should let him, ey?

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

9 posted 2002-12-16 04:42 PM

Rock on, sweet friend!!

Hugs

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

10 posted 2002-12-16 05:41 PM

Hey, Donna, can I rock your world
And stone your solar system?
Your lips would be like flags unfurled
Recalling how I kissed them!

We'll rock and roll the whole night through
And cook like Betty Crocker.
All this and more I'd do for you
If I could be your rocker!!!

(with apologies to Mr. Gentle Spirit!)

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

11 posted 2002-12-16 05:54 PM

nice to see you are feeling better...

stirring poem...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

12 posted 2002-12-16 07:39 PM

Thanks everyone so very much.  I have been trying to lighten up my mood all day today so there had been a lot of silliness.
I appreciate you all having a little fun with me today.

Deer, you are such a doll.  This is precious and I thank you!

Cpat, feeling a lil better today only because I hang on to the belief that things
do get better. Thank you for your never ending kindness, it is much appreciated.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

13 posted 2002-12-16 08:27 PM

I enjoyed this very much.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

14 posted 2002-12-16 08:44 PM

Great job! I don't even have a critique on my latest pet peeve (rhyming) tonight

"it was cute, it was like he was shy and didn't want to make it too obvious"
~ Reena
I'm Rhondiforous!

sweetwater
Member

since 2002-12-16

Posts 178
Perth

15 posted 2002-12-16 08:48 PM

Sometimes when I read a poem it just hits the right spot with the right punch.. like when I read this one... perfect, sweet and beautiful use of a modern day vernacular.

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

16 posted 2002-12-18 09:19 PM

Donna~ Sounds like you been listening to some Brooks & Dunn LOL. Enjoyed...Paul

" To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you "

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

17 posted 2002-12-18 09:46 PM

Gentle Spirit - get ready for some rock and roll....

BC

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