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If I Could Paint the Sky
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If I Could Paint the Sky |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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If I could paint the sky just once before I die in the blue of you, the clouds would be jealous, but gloriously highlighted in wisps of pure lightest hue. If I could paint the day into the night as you, the sun, moon, and stars would all join hands and bow to the master of blue. If I could but for one moment paint Love the way you do, I'd hold my heart in my hands, and the colors on my canvass would all bleed true. If I could paint the sky it would be a portrait of you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kacy this is absolutely gourgeous writing! Loved this! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kacy, I love this one, too. And, blue is my favorite color of all.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you, Donna and Ethel. Your pure hearts are mixed forever into this hue of blue. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kasey--I think you do paint the sky, and more! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kacy, This is wonderful. So special. Well written, for it reads so smoothly and content is astonishingly beautiful. Enjoyed much. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This was simply superb! Your pen was definitely doubling as a paintbrush with this write! ~ happy holiday hugs EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
these blue pages bring out some awesome work, and this piece is just that. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I'd hold my heart in my hands, and the colors on my canvass would all bleed true sheer genius Kacy |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, may you always paint as you do, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The canvas of your art is limitless. ThisDiamond |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kacy, This one is a keeper, enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I am so delighted that you all enjoyed this one. It came to me exactly as it is written, gifted from the blue, not a single word was changed. I thank my muse each time I receive these gifts. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
What a marvelous painting this would be... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Decaflame, so good to see your name here again.  Thank you for your gentle warm reply. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Approaches spiritual this. Enjoyed |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Well, if you were writing about me..it would be a sky gray....if you were writing about Balladeer....there'd be alot of hot air coming from the south....but since you're obviously writing about someone special..you've colored your world wonderfully.... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kacy~ This is such a beautiful write. You've painted a lovely masterpiece with your words. I enjoyed this very much. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks to each of you, who are part of this beautiful blue sky of inspiration. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If I could paint the sky just once before I die in the blue of you, the clouds would be jealous, but gloriously highlighted in wisps of pure lightest hue. If I could paint the day into the night as you, the sun, moon, and stars would all join hands and bow to the master of blue. If I could but for one moment paint Love the way you do, I'd hold my heart in my hands, and the colors on my canvass would all bleed true. ==================================== and NOW I would like to THANK your muse.. Kacy this is so cool...what a wonderful moment of inspire... a definite keeper and a (IWIHWT) outstanding gifting from your muse. Bravo poetess groovy-girlie!!  ~~~~~ "We shared some special nights together We said we'd watch the morning rise But when the sun was all around us ... It wasn't nothing I hadn't seen in your eyes" ~*~ "Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind Well tomorrow holds only mystery And who's to say what might be But I know in you I've found a love so strong The sun and the moon look on in jealousy" song verses from "There And Back Again" by Vertical Horizon |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
sad, and sincerely beautifull. You have done it again Never be normal! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
The last line... I love the whole thing, but the last line just got me "it was cute, it was like he was shy and didn't want to make it too obvious" |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
..love the colors of your words--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
enjoyed... seeing ou paint with words the things you say you wish you could.... nicely done.. very nice. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A beautiful palette of love...wonderful!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kacy, this is very beautiful...and very special! ~Hugs for this keeper~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful sentiment matched with beautiful imagery.....I love it, wonderful writing. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Midnitesun - a very precious write. I enjoyed this muchly... BC |
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