Open Poetry #24 |
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Ways to Praise-a poem |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
There are endless ways to praise God’s abounding roar.I’ll jump into the ocean first. * * * When the soul lies down in the sand, The world is too full to talk about. Just hold me. cry, weeping speech into the sea. The breeze has secrets to tell you. I would love to kiss you. In the body of the world, they say, There is a soul and you are that. * * * But we have ways within each other that will never be said by anyone. * * * Day and night fumble gracefully towards each other; Melody, a quiet, bright song.If it fades, We fade. * * * There’s frenzy in my head, Pirouetting to the rhythm of an unseen soul, like flocks of undulating doves. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nice, enjoyed the frenzy, the pirouette. Yes, there is a multitude of ways to praise, and to enjoy the thoughts that tumble from another POV. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
::Bump!:: you never cease to dig as far as you can go. so spiritual. so discerning. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! this is deep! very! |
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