Open Poetry #24 |
Sharing PB and J |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I sat there thinking, thought I heard a noise from above, overhead. I couldn’t describe in a word so I started to read instead. I did, I heard the patter of little feet that moved out of sight. I ran to my room, grabbed a glove and my trusty rusty flashlight. I pulled away the ceiling tile to see what had tweaked both my ears. This thing unseen brought a wry smile in spite of a twinge of light fears. The light did shine a narrow beam from corner to corner and back. A glimpse of tail from a small seam spurred me on toward the attack. I ran into the spare bedroom where the guns and ammo reside. Night vision goggles on high zoom and cammies for stealth and to hide. The bayonet was locked in place on the Seven Six Two magnum. I smeared on the green and black paste and loaded a fifty round drum. Laces long on a warriors boots were tied ever tight for the fight dogged to be the one who shoots I kicked on the thousand watt light. I peeked again into the space where the tail was seen in the crack. And what I saw put a grin on my face I decided not to attack. For in the space above my chair a mouse eating PB and J had made a move to dine and share and I decided he could stay. [This message has been edited by Magnus (12-23-2002 07:09 PM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
hahaha!!! you described the whole scene so well that if I hadn't read the title first then I would have been scared for you! But then, you always describe things so well, another astounding write! Keep it up and Merry Christ-mas to you Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Barry, Smiling here. The camouflage make-up started the grin, and didn't stop til the end. Cute! Happy Holidays, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Most Excellent! Thanks for the smile. Your tale made me think of the movie Mouse Trap... perhaps is was best you let the rodent be. Once again, a most enjoyable read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh, this is so good Barry! Much enjoyed the read. ~Merry Christmas to you and yours.~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Magnus - Tis the season that even the wee mice share what they have with us...lol. Love this one. holiday hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
GEEZ! Remind me never to break into your house, Barry. You sound like a green-beret ninja dirty Harry kinda guy! (disregard the previous comment if you keep Spam in the pantry! ) |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I must say...I can envision the scene with a wide smile of my own. Bravo for this cute concept...Honestly, I don't know where you get this stuff. ThisDiamond |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
The night before Christmas and all the mice are not making a peep. So if you do need to hunt I have some special critters for ya and as big as mice...hehehe Great poetic story, thoroughly enjoyed. Cher Poetry is: |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry/beary....you are so hugable! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
You softy! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Barry, this is so cute. It was like I could see a cartoon as i was reading... Real cute.. "Love makes the world go around" |
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