Open Poetry #24 |
I Didn't Want You To Be Lonely |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Alan Ayers * * * Part of me went missing On the day you passed away And it never has returned To this very day I didn't want you to be lonely So I gave you part of me You are here with me in spirit And through your eyes I now see My life is sometimes cloudy But your image is always clear As I write my words of love I feel certain that you're here My grief is sometimes overwhelming As my emotions flow so free I imagine you're here beside me The place I wish you could be I'm often lost within my thoughts Inside myself is where I go As I reveal my inner feelings And put my heart on show 'tho you're never coming back Through my words I help you live From the love you gave to me There is so much I have to give So I'll continue to pen my feelings For they help to get me through As my words relay to others How very fond I was of you I am in motion |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is sadly beautiful. Writing our feelings is always good therapy Merry Christmas. Maree |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh geez....just sad and beautiful, yes.... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
This is painful but good. Keep writing and letting out the feelings though. I could relate all too well to this piece exept for the death of the one I loved most, I've never been able to write about. ..not sure why. Anyway, just keep hope through the holidays and coming days. Take care. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
WaaaaaW I just dont know what to say,, this is really perfect poem.. So sensitive ...And nice picture. Hugessssss Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big huggssssssss) This is so sadly beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all who truly feel this way and I wish for true happiness to be wished among all who seperate and go their own ways and for the friendship to remain! (sad sigh) God Bless You and Merry Christmas, sweet friend, yay! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sue...James |
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