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Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2002-12-21 09:49 PM

CHRISTMAS MOURNING

A remembrance
Of childhood dreams
Wrapped in black lace
Dwelling beneath my tear- stained
Face

Childish we
Laughter and holly
Sweet innocent kindred chase
Ignorant of the deep red
Trace

Growing up
Speeding trough time
Following the red line
Bliss whizz to sadness and
Decline

Here again
This jolly season
Quiet solely and yearning
I slumber awake to christmas
Mourning

enchantingvamp
Member

since 2002-12-21

Posts 214
Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas!

1 posted 2002-12-21 10:23 PM

This piece made me completely and totally sad.....

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-12-21 10:27 PM

This was sad to me, too, but written well...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2002-12-21 10:38 PM

Blissful romance ignorant of the bleed...
Not dark, just true. First time I have read you. Welcome. ThisDiamond

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-12-22 08:47 PM

Mourning the times of your past?
Happy holidays to you, and peaceful blissful thoughts.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-22-2002 08:48 PM).]

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2002-12-22 11:14 PM

I thought this interesting and I usually don't identify the meaning or intent of the writer. So I think and feel this is the mourning of Christ.
Even now as we celebrate His birthday who can forget His horrible death.
Anyway, this works for me...
and made me think.....Enjoyed a great deal.

Hugs and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2002-12-23 02:27 AM

sad, very sad write...I am there wih ya on this one...I remember well.

Lethe
Junior Member

since 2001-04-10

Posts 36
Blackforrest

7 posted 2002-12-24 06:47 PM

Nicely written, enjoyed the read.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

8 posted 2002-12-24 07:56 PM

I like... it brought back memories of some not-so-happy Christmases... *smiles* thank you for the read

I'm dangerous when left alone hehehe

*sniff* I've never been abducted by aliens...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-12-26 01:12 AM

Interesting...James

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