Open Poetry #24 |
Because of You |
Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Because of You Tears stream quietly. By you, I am woman, loved. Infinity, ours. Measured only by heartbeats. Merry Christmas, my Darling. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Tender yet somehow sad thoughts in this one. Is he gone? Maybe I've misunderstood. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, so loving, and a definate twinge of sadness... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Don't know if this'll make sense but I like the balance in this. It's perfect. Love and tears, hand in hand for the holidays. I need a new job. Anyone wanna pay me to do this??? |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
merry x-mas to you as well sweetheart. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
"Measured by heartbeats"...a devine way to gauge the depth and breadth of one's love for a special person...truly a beautifully expressed Christmas present.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfectly beautiful Elan. There is always a sort of underlying sadness to the holidays. Have a wonderfilled magical Christmas! ~Smiles, luv and hugs, Nancy~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Elan The biggest love sometimes makes the most tears. and Merry Christmas! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
beautiful |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I find this very intriguing and somewhat sad, with a sense of longing and deep love. Beautifully written, very tender... Happy Holidays Elan... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
not really sad to me...tears can be happy tears...very nice write! |
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