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Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

0 posted 2002-12-23 06:53 AM

tonight I am
eyes closed awake
in black lace thoughts,
where words become
witchy woman potions
slow massaging senses
until,
I can feel the candle burn
and melt
into liquid-slide
on the smooth side
of midnight's ride

time travels fast
in the crystal ball

so long spent
in time's warp,
wondering of you..about you,
sneaking silent reads
of your mind magic;

now approaches the spell,
time is near
for these eyes
to wander through you,
touch,
feel,
taste you

time is near
for the witchy woman's
magic carpet ride--
seduce her mind
and she will
belong to you
~spellbound~

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

[This message has been edited by Sandpiper (12-23-2002 09:58 AM).]

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

1 posted 2002-12-23 11:36 AM

Possession.....obsession. What perception!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-12-23 11:49 AM

ah..such spells do indeed have power...

I enjoyed the read...and the thoughts.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-12-23 12:26 PM

What a great spell! Enjoyed this very much.

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2002-12-23 07:12 PM

so long spent
in time's warp,
wondering of you..about you,

The whole poem was great Sandpiper, but I think those were my favourite lines.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2002-12-23 07:17 PM

Sandpiper,

Very creative. But, those last four lines says it all. Enjoyed.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-12-23 07:44 PM

The write matches the title to a T. Very
mood setting poem...well done...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2002-12-23 11:17 PM

I can feel the candle burn
and melt
into liquid-slide
on the smooth side
of midnight's ride

That's a very nice write Sandpiper~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2002-12-24 03:20 AM

seductive and sensual...a great write.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2002-12-24 06:36 AM

liked the whole seduction thing,
but a wad of cash and a nice piece helps too, doesnt it girls?

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

10 posted 2002-12-25 05:04 AM

Sandpiper~ Very captivating thoughts.
Enjoyed...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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