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Soul's Adore.....
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Soul's Adore..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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…..she said, love me tomorrow and let’s forget about today pretend you didn’t hear me crying didn’t hear the sappy things I sometimes say….. …..he said, I just can’t love you it wouldn’t be right but baby you look so pretty here, in the ache of midnight….. …..and she wished he knew just once she wanted to be more wanted to be his only love to be his soul’s adore….. ….and he wished he could tell her of all the dreams held inside that when he said he couldn’t….. …..he lied….. ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (12-21-2002 02:26 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling at this one. I love the he said/she said format. Sometimes it's OK to lie. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Ah Susan...what a bittersweet write! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Susan, it saddens me to see so much unrequited love in this world, for there is nothing to be ashamed of as you release that burden and even if you are rejected you know the answer and am wasting no more time! (kiss on cheek) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Susan...I'm so pleased you can spend some time with us over the holidays... we sure have missed you.. and this is beautiful sweetie. ~Hugs~  ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA You got that right. Enjoyed |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's so good to see your name gracing our halls again.. you've been too long gone... it's good to have you HOME! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
He said the wrong thing... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Very, very impressive writing. I liked this format. Hugs and a very happy holiday to you and your family...Marti Let our love circle the world and |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - you're a true romantic, your writings are always filled with you... BC |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, this is one I can relate to very well. Thanks!  The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
Oh wow, this piece knocked me over, the sadness, the aching.....this one is to be placed on my favorite reads list for sure. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Susan, ther is a much said in the "unsaid", don't you think? "Love makes the world go around" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
bittersweet |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
wonderful title, I see reflections in the mirror of your words--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
i love this brings back memories thank you  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
SEA - Oh, this is going right into my library. Wonderful. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Susan Bitter sweet poem, and a great ending! Enjoyed! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
just once she wanted to be more wanted to be his only love Oh, yes. *S* You've written many beauties... but I think this just may be my favorite. *S* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice Sea...James |
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