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John B Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 68Texas, USA 
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Owned darkness leaves place for discrimination. Not too bright in the light if I told you so, But it’s not the way I meant it though. And if I let you feel where I grow Would you agree the light not bright Or argue of possibilities and not your sight. Sight which is capable of uncontrollable height, Define yourself and everything feels ‘right’ Because it’s love and love is ours Like children lifting every moment, powers, So just let go of what doubt seems to devour It’s only a distraction to help realize your self, And no error battle needed when ‘I’ identifies itself. Recognizing your whole is where you dream, Realizing what ‘they’ sees of you will become only more if you let seem. [This message has been edited by John B (12-23-2002 06:32 AM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Would you agree the light not bright Or argue of possibilities and not your sight." I liked these lines best....great flow here too  |
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John B Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 68Texas, USA |
Thank you. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Enjoyed the message in the poem. It indeed touches a place inside. Sunkissed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Recognizing your whole is where you dream" So true, so true.  |
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