Open Poetry #24 |
Light of Day |
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are beautiful in the crystal light of day etched in the frost of my thoughts where you glow in sharp slivers and hard truths that make me want. To touch and see through frozen iridescent icicles that simplify the season, pictured on a postcard; you are the reason without knowing and all the beauty if beholds. For every star that's fallen I have wished upon and wondered, if you could read my mind I would place them in your hands and fly the world over just to reach you and admire. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (12-23-2002 02:31 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool! no pun intended |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
On a happier note... I think I've written enough bluesy stuff to last me a lifetime... If Santa cooperates I'll be sporting a brand new muse come the New Year. (but don't quote me just yet) Thanks Dixie~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
like this.... but then I like your style..and the bluesy..suits me fine... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOve this one. Both your muses will be welcome on my monitor, frosted or thawed. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Especially tender and bright. Enjoyed so thoroughly. ThisDiamond Merry Christmas |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Hey, I'll take whatever you have to offer. You do it all really well! And Happy Holidays! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
who shall always seek love's perfection; held as a water crystal ball, shook ever so lightly, watching the storm's recovery inside of glass. No one has ever been held in dearer hands. Jeff [This message has been edited by ShadowRider (12-23-2002 08:44 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lori...what Jeff said. This is so very beautiful! Merry Christmas sweetie! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
you are the reason without knowing this one line, to me speak volumes. enjoyed blues |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
enjoyed the winter wonderland images, and thoughts--lovely! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Just keep writing.....there is a light, you are finding it, and your glow is just as lovely....Miss seeing you''.....Happy Holidays..... Lauren~ I sing to life |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you for sharing your kindness ...you're all so good to me. Best wishes to each and every one of you in the New Year~ May your hearts be blessed with all that makes you happy and gives you peace. |
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