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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2002-12-23 12:15 PM


You are beautiful in the crystal light of day
etched in the frost of my thoughts
where you glow in sharp slivers
and hard truths that make me want.

To touch and see through frozen iridescent icicles
that simplify the season, pictured on a postcard;
you are the reason without knowing
and all the beauty if beholds.

For every star that's fallen
I have wished upon and wondered,
if you could read my mind
I would place them in your hands
and fly the world over

just to reach you and admire.


[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (12-23-2002 02:31 AM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-12-23 01:53 AM


cool!

no pun intended

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2002-12-23 02:19 AM


On a happier note...
I think I've written enough bluesy stuff
to last me a lifetime...
If Santa cooperates I'll be sporting
a brand new muse come the New Year.  
(but don't quote me just yet)

Thanks Dixie~

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2002-12-23 11:54 AM


like this.... but then I like your style..and the bluesy..suits me fine...


Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2002-12-23 12:21 PM


LOve this one. Both your muses will be welcome on my monitor, frosted or thawed.
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-12-23 12:25 PM


Especially tender and bright. Enjoyed so thoroughly. ThisDiamond
Merry Christmas

Larry C
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6 posted 2002-12-23 12:36 PM


Hey, I'll take whatever you have to offer. You do it all really well! And Happy Holidays!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

ShadowRider
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7 posted 2002-12-23 08:42 PM


You are one
who shall always seek love's perfection;
held as a water crystal ball,
shook ever so lightly,
watching the storm's recovery
inside of glass.
No one has ever been held in dearer hands.

Jeff


[This message has been edited by ShadowRider (12-23-2002 08:44 PM).]

Enchantress
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8 posted 2002-12-23 08:46 PM


Lori...what Jeff said.
This is so very beautiful!
Merry Christmas sweetie!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

Dark Angel
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9 posted 2002-12-26 07:36 AM


you are the reason without knowing

this one line, to me speak volumes.

enjoyed blues

Sandpiper
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10 posted 2002-12-26 08:05 AM


enjoyed the winter wonderland images, and thoughts--lovely!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

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In Your Poetic Mind
11 posted 2002-12-26 11:19 AM


Just keep writing.....there is a light, you are finding it, and your glow is just as lovely....Miss seeing you''.....Happy Holidays.....


Lauren~

I sing to life
To it's tragic beauty
To pain and strife
Let all that dances through me
The rise and the fall, I lived through it all

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
12 posted 2002-12-26 11:48 PM


Thank you for sharing your kindness ...you're all so good to me.

Best wishes to each and every one of you in the New Year~  May your hearts be blessed with all that makes you happy and gives you peace.

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