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Something of Substance
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Something of Substance |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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 Something of Substance I’ve looked long at my fingers how they touch the air dispel the dust in light of stair I’ve seen them catch my fall to ground and pick up leaves and things around The mirror is a play along a friend that makes no sound at all nor grumbles when I take her toys I watch with much interest and see the way it does things just like me The yard is fabric light and dark and warm or cool the grass like park depending on which way I turn in dip of driveway’s down I see another laying down piece of me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie A lovely write, enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Beautifully layed down imagery, Martie. A precious photo, a forever keeper. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I’ve seen them catch my fall to ground and pick up leaves and things around Always a nice touch from you Martie~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
ahhh how you see through the eyes of Samantha.. she is beautiful Martie and so are you. adding this precious piece to my library. Maree  |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - sweet Sam will have so many wonderful poems in her scrap book - poems that say what she thought as she grew surrounded by your love and your wonderful words - Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Martie...how precious this is!! Simply beautiful. ~Hugs dear lady~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Martie, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I cried reading this because it is sooooooo beautiful and Samantha looks so innocent and precious in this picture as I know she will find all her heart desires! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Samantha, a part of who you, dear one. She's such a lovely child and I can't believe how much she's grown. She has a very, very sweet grandma, my friend. *hugs*  The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sort of a different style for you Martie, I thoroughly enjoyed it. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Martie~ You write these words so smooth and soft, like a cloud hugging a mountain or a stream trickling through a meadow of flowers. I guess you know I really enjoyed this...Paul " To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you " |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Hello Martie. I just want to say Merry Christmas. And this is one of the funniest picture I've seen in a long time. |
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