Open Poetry #24 |
The Taste Of Your Lips |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
The taste of your lips sweet, sensuous kiss I so dearly miss The feel of your touch so tenderly caressing me such pleasure to be The sound of your voice with deep love heard in every single word The scent of you so completely masculine I inhale the smell of your skin The sight of your body powerful, muscular, strong my eyes see nothing wrong The love of you passionate, loving, caring our hearts with each other, sharing [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-22-2002 06:47 PM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'... The love of you passionate, loving, caring our hearts with each other, sharing ...' Beautifully written line. Seems your missing your Gary a whole big bunch. Hope you'll be together for Christmas. Hugs, Marti Let our love circle the world and |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ethel - oh, the longing in this poem...I can feel it. Lovely. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
this stirred the imagination, very well done garysgirl.......he should read it, I imagine. *Smile* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - I have no words to say about how tender and lovely this write is.... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh this is so sweet and tender.... Beautiful piece Ethel... I do hope you and Gary will be together for Christmas. ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You write of love and longing with such passion Ethel. Much enjoyed these tender thoughts of yours. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very sweet sentiments expressed in a loving way |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ethel, Wonderful. I'm sure you will be together with him for holidays. Enjoy! May your love touch all around you this season as it does all of us here, as you share your poetry. Hugs and love, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Ethel, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me cry as I thought of my Joanna reading this and how she is that special person who makes me feel this way! (kiss on cheek) I wish you and Gary to be happy together this Christmas, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Ethel..I hope Santa reads this poem..he'll have no problem figuring out what to bring you for Christmas... believe in what your heart feels... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
reminds me of the Chicago song "You Come To My Senses" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
lovely words Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marti, thank you for your sweet words. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem..... Chris, Yes, I was wanting to see him really bad when I wrote this. Thanks for reading... tone of voice, Thanks for your reply. Yes, he will read it. "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-06-2003 05:05 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, Thank you for reading and replying. I appreciate your thinking that it's tender and lovely. Nancy Lee, Thank you for liking it and for your well wishes for me and Gary..... "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-06-2003 05:06 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, Thank you for reading and replying. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.... Inkedgoddess, Thanks for reading. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.... "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-06-2003 05:09 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, I'm really glad that you liked it. Thanks for your well wishes..... Noah, Thank you again for knowing just what to say....... "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-06-2003 05:12 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Scorpio, You're right, Santa knows exactly what(who) I want for Christmas..... Dixie, I really love that group, too. Thanks for replying... Raph, Thank you. I appreciate that....... "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-06-2003 05:17 PM).] |
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