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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
My shrink calls it therapy sitting in his stark depressing den bleeding into his golden goblet for his tasting like a fine wine he lifts to his lips analizing, examining, savoring..... brutal honesty he calls it the bleeding ritual of healing Therapy I call it sitting on my dark porch railing in the sweet dead of night chain smoking your brand listening the to rustle of withered leaves blowing nowhere in the November wind, welcoming the boney carressing fingers of numbness as they invaid my soul knowing that when they reach their goal I will have gleefully deprived them of sucking the warmth from me Therapy I call it snuggling your pillow laced with your cologne to my chest because it was the one thing you didn't think to hurriedly pack away in the U-Haul you ran off in Brutal honesty....... My shrink wears your cologne so twice a week I bleed for him I allow him to taste me As I wish you still did..... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions In Poetry. I hope that you enjoy your time here. I really enjoyed reading your poem and hope to see more of your poetry soon. Thank you for sharing.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
Thanks for the warm welcome.....yes I am enjoying it here, I've read so many wonderful works already tonight....so looking forward to reading more.... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
enchantingvamp - stunning write of inner thoughts. This is very good, I liked it muchly... BC |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Excellent first post! A wow and Welcome!  |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to our home! You write a sad and bittersweet tale here. You're going to fit in nicely. I look forward to reading a lot more from you. Please check your email for a special greeting!  |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
The card was lovely....thank you ever so much for your thoughtfullness..... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sounds like youre trying to shake off some demons, you spoke of them well |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome here, your raw and honest talents...the tallons still holding on... Best wishes. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Leona, this is such a bittersweet and powerful debut, sweet friend, I hope now love has consoled your heart and healed you with grace, this is wonderful, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Leona, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Leona, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-21-2002 10:38 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! You ARE going to like it here!  Karilea |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
Everyone is so friendly here, yes I do love it already, I havent been to many forums where it is so busy, with so many great pieces to read.....wonderful, just fab. My pieces tend to come out dark and sometimes depressing.....dont need a shrink to figure that one out lol....but hey, hope you guys enjoy. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I prefer your therapy but find another cologne. Oh and welcome. [This message has been edited by RSWells (12-21-2002 10:49 PM).] |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Welcome to Passions. This is a very nice entrance. I love the way you tell the story and are able to show the attitude with which it is carried. Loved this. ~~I Love You~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your first post. I shall look forward to more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I call this...therapy. Welcome. and you just blew me away. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions! I hope you stay awhile...I love your stuff...you'll find out that I love sad and dark...looking forward to more from you! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Welcome to the deep blue, remarkable first post, first of many to come I hope. raph |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Powerfully expressed feelings in this first write...welcome to Passions in Poetry.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
 you made me depressed. but thats not a bad thing. **** [*****] -chris. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
the bleeding stops..eventually--strong write--enjoyed & Welcome! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Hey enchantingvamp, not all psychologists are as it is portrayed in this poem. :-) Welcome. "am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed this therapy session. For that's what Passions sometimes is for me....the greatest therapy for me is to read and write. PS, I'd look for a different scent of Therapist. No more free drinks. |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
great start. welcome to Passions. I will definitely look for your name when browsing through titles. Christopher |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Really enjoyed reading you, will be looking out for more of your work. Welcome. Maree |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
enchantingvamp~ Welcome to our family of friends. You write a very touching tale of hurt and healing as we all go through. I hope this place helps your heart heal as we are always here for each other...Paul " To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you " |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Firstly I wish to compliment you on this veryyyyyyy touching write... Secondly, I want2say hi2uPoetFriend and that I look4ward to reading more of your poems in the days ahead... Smiles2U... *~coco~* |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I don't know who called this 'stunning' but it is......wonderful wonderful....really enjoyed....welcome welcome welcome |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Leona, Don't know how I missed this, being your first post. It is terrific. I can so relate to the feelings here. Written from the heart. Enjoying all your poetry. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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