Open Poetry #24 |
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Night To Remember |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now ![]() |
“NIGHT TO REMEMBER” by Bill Charles ~~~~ If a moonbeam should kiss a star, and the moon itself should once sigh, it would be like you soft lips touching, and seeing the tenderness in your eyes… Mystical would be my whispers in your ear, tender words not heard even once before, only enchantment would your being know, in return your sighs would be of more… Desire beckons, loves yearning cries out, once loved, it will not soon be forgotten, one precious night to remember with you, words from a romantic pen, of passion… ~~~~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sigh oh sigh |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well done BC, very nice write of a tender moment shared.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh Bill.... How beautiful this is! And...so very very romantic..as always. Extremely well done! ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Bill, Of all-time favorite lines of yours, this one is special: "tender words not heard even once before." How special is that! So, too, is this lovely romantic poem. Smiling..... Happy holidays, Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If a moonbeam should kiss a star, and the moon itself should once sigh, ================================= what a lovely image ... a wonderfully romantic inspire here. Well done poet sir ... some one will be swooning the moon for this ![]() Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang Bill, I don't know how you write such mushy romantic stuff...where are the rest of the men that can write stuff like this? |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Oh Bill, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I wish for this happiness to always glow in your heart! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely romantic thoughts, my friend...beautifully penned! |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, my friend, this is a very beautiful romatic love poem, as only you can write..... You know I love it..... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
such romance, very beautiful.....likes it very much |
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