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savouring your return
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savouring your return |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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My eyes fix, through the multicoloured crowd, upon the face i last looked upon, thru train window, when we parted in body. New haircut and all, there you are, subtle hints of change don't throw me, you are my scent. Smiling inside at the touch of your presence, I revel in the fact that you don't see me, perfect chance, in your natural form, to look upon the limbs i have so missed. Friendly voices penetrate you, I sit among the mass that waits, your eyes only fix, upon mine. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a nice welcome home.  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"subtle hints of change don't throw me, you are my scent." wow, very cool lines here  |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Really nice. Like it a lot. And, I echo what see said. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sweet homecoming, I love the part about seeing him in his natural state, i think that's very important sometimes raph |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this touched me...the feeling of knowing, no matter what else changes. |
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