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Rainbowdust
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since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2002-12-19 03:41 AM

To believe in love
Is to believe in fairy tales
To fall in love
Is to admit they're real
To stay in love
Is to blend magic with reality
And to make it last forever
Is to fall in love with you.

****
I don't even know if this passes for a poem; it was a message I wrote in an e-card a while ago.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-12-19 03:51 AM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, and I do think this is a gorgeous poem that would be perfect for Hallmark-esque cards, yay! (big hugggssssss) This is so beautiful, sweet friend, God Bless You, I think "Forever...Yours Truly" would be a pretty title, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Shireen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-19-2002 03:52 AM).]

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

2 posted 2002-12-19 05:54 AM

"A poets Kiss" possibly or maybe "Loves wish"
I never was much good with titles

Take a good look at my face
Well, don't my smile look out of place
look a little closer its easy to trace
The tracks of my tears

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2002-12-19 07:29 AM

Rainbowdust,
it is definitely poetic and I would call it "to believe" but it is your poenm and you decide.

Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Laney
Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 85
Illinois

4 posted 2002-12-19 08:16 AM

I believe in Fairytales!! Cute write! I would call it, "my fairytale"

Let the creative juices flow!!

--Alana

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-12-19 08:46 AM

I like the feelings from your heart in this "poem". I would call it "Making Love Last Forever". Happy choosings....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

winston
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 204
NW of Eden

6 posted 2002-12-20 08:03 AM

How about "Magic Realism"? :-)

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2002-12-20 08:47 PM

I finally decided to take Alana up on her suggestion and call it "My Fairytale". Thanks everyone for your thoughts though.. I wonder if it's possible to hire someone to come up with titles for you!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-12-20 09:49 PM

Rainbowdust - I had a title that might be for this write, but I see you already have one now...

BC

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

9 posted 2002-12-20 09:53 PM

Shireen,

Nicely done! But I want to know what Bill's title was. smiling here....

Hugs and warm regards. Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

10 posted 2002-12-21 12:58 PM

I want to know what Bill's suggetion was too! Please indulge us!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

11 posted 2002-12-21 02:13 PM

Fantastic, I've been dwelling on the other side, thank you for bringing some more light to PIP

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2002-12-21 02:29 PM

Does it pass? Most definitely!

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