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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Longing With every sunset that goes by My heart calls for you to be near Sometimes I just break down and cry Love and longing with every tear It is hard to wait and be strong I need your arms to hold me I know it won’t be very long I’ll be where I’m suppose to be I love you and give you my hand You’re my every dream come alive With you next to me we can stand You are my strength and my drive Always I’ll cherish and love you And to your soul I will be true |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awwwww...dang, you'll get there in no time  wish I could make it be tomorrow for you two love birds. Hope you have a Merry Christmas! |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Hope time flies until you're in his arms. Beautiful poem.The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Tara, hang in there, sweet friend, I know just how you feel as I have these feelings for my Joanna too, I wish for you both to be together real soon, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Tara~ SO good to see your name here again! This is a lovely write, my friend. I hope the dreams come true for the two of you very soon. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Lovely and tender... I wish for you both to be together soon. aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
HI Tara!! yeah...long distance sucks..aint no getting around that fact... good to see you here girlie... Merry Christmas. Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rosepetals25 - I know well that longing feeling. Peace walk with you... BC |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
oooh i feel for you, i suppose we have to remember that its always worth the wait. i thought to myself yesterday, try and remember this feeling of complete contentment of being together , and remember how worth the endless waiting it is! but it's so hard, when someone is often so far away. i'm rambling. anyway, thankyou for the lovely write. enjoyed. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Tara, you guys need to fast forward. Happy holidays, please visit here more often! Now where is that knave Dave? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
intense longing, I feel. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Thank you everyone for stopping to read. I know this isn’t the best sonnet. I haven’t written anything in a LONG times, not including a few random haikus. I was excited to get any thing out… so I thought I’d share. I’m glad you took the time to stop in and leave such nice responses. As for Dave… I suppose honesty is the best policy. He did not feel welcome here by some people, so he has moved on. I wish he could have the same experience I have had here. However, I do understand why he left and would have done the same thing if I was in his shoes. I will tell him that you asked about him though I hope everyone has very happy holidays! Stay safe. Hugs, Tara |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm not good at waiting...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
My Love and I know this feeling very well.. "Love makes the world go around" |
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