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When You Say My Name.....
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When You Say My Name..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Is it any wonder the skies cloud my eyes? brooding is my heart tangling confounding these emotions .......and the sound of your voice telling me that you’ve missed me what am I to do with that? Knowing, that it will be forever until I hear you again until you hold that possessive tone when you say my name and leave my soul undone....  ~SEA~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Kiddo... you write like this and it leaves me all undone... Happy Valentines to you and yours... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you...  and Happy Valentine's Day to you too mister  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sea, this is beautiful. You write so well, that I never know if it's personal or not, so I don't comment very much. Know that I do love your work, though. I wish I could write as good as you do......  Happy Valentine's Day...... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ethel, you always write so wonderfully! I enjoy everything. This one is very personal...never worry about that part, always tell me what you want to say, ok? thank you |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great poem. Eric |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"and leave my soul undone...." is this the power of love unrequited? absolutely! hauntingly beautiful! Rf [This message has been edited by Robert Frazier (02-14-2003 07:45 PM).] |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You already know my feelings before I even put them here, sweetie. You've expressed yourself well in this piece. Happy Valentines and my best to you! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Is it any wonder the skies cloud my eyes? brooding is my heart tangling confounding these emotions .......and the sound of your voice ===================================== when you say my name and leave my soul undone.... ===================================== Oh yeah... say my name baby... ( thats on the moth application for the pretty blue flame, you know) rofl  ( bad moth -- bad moth) lmao Ok...sorry...waaay too much raspberry tea today.. You KNOW I been waiting for this... knew the ache would be stiring your muse. lovely in its wistful longing girlie. and Im sure there will be more...and I'll be here. |
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