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Toe's New car
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Toe's New car |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Not being much to look at Toe decided to buy a car One with lots of chrome and stuff that with the ladies would get him far He shopped for several weeks then months a looking for the right one Finally found a Mercedes Benz that the salesman said would run He called up his old friend Deer and asked him for some help Together they got it pushed to home and Toe let out a Yelp “I’ll shine it up so nice and clean, just you wait and see!” Deer just sadly shook his head then went inside to pee The days they flew for Toe as he toiled with diligent care His nights were spent on concrete floor, until in haggard stare He looked in prideful awe at his pride and joy He’d turned that old Mercedes Benz into quite a toy. Deer was called with joyful glee as Toe made plans to sin After all he needed Deer to be the cars engine |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Smiling here. You write humor, too. Cute, and wonder now what the results of this will be. I'll wait and see what Toe and Deer come up with. Nothing like a Friday morning smile to start my day...so much good poetry this AM, I'm late for everything I was supposed to do already. Glad I got to see this, though. Grinning here... Thanks, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Cpat Hair - now me thinks the 'Toe' would buy a car like this... BC |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"One with lots of chrome and stuff that with the ladies would get him far" Cpat, Is that what you think will get the ladies? Give me a '69 GTO, that is what will impress me. Oh wait, I already have one! Hmmm...What else could impress me??? Susan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ey...uh.....HEHEHEHEHEHEHE!!!! |
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poohbear19 Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 94Colorado, USA |
Good poem. It is funny and will make anyone laugh. It rhymes great. Good write and keep it up. Andrea "Whether you think you can or you think you can't, you're right!" ~Bach |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Cute write Captain!! Much enjoyed the read and chuckles. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Wax on! Wax off! The car it shine Wax on! Wax off! It look real fine But got no wine Got no woman It got no song Cause with big Toe In driver seat It look all wrong |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so cute, Capt. Ron. I'll be glad when Toe and Balladeer see it...LOL  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Not being much to look at Toe decided to buy a car Now yassee??? There you go... believing Bal's jealousy inspired lies again instead of my completely objective observations regarding Toe's marvelous physique and incredibly handsome features! So your poem starts out with an erroneous assumption... and then you just dig deeper! LOL Enjoyed the tale, Cpat... *S* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-14-2003 02:44 PM).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I sold this car though...found a real sucker...think his name was Ron?...See "Ron's been robbed".... |
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